Yes, this is better.

I am also a Jess and Rory fan. He kind of sucked as a boyfriend, before he grew up, but if given another chance, I truly believe he would do it right, this time. Dean was ok, and I despise Logan.

Thank you for this! I love that you made Lorelei pregnant instead because I have hated Logen since day 1 and the whole him being married and with Rory made me sick.

Keep it up this is a great start

This made me feel so much better. So cathartic to change the story in my head. I'm definitely team Jess but also team Rory needs a better story in general that doesn't include being pregnant by a married guy so that was perfect even if she hadn't chosen Jess. For it to be Lorelai instead makes more sense because ASP left their whole baby situation hanging.

Lol I thought Rory was the one that was pregnant and good job with the vows because we didn't see it in the show and thanks that was pretty good read