Reviews for Alternate life
Guest chapter 1 . 7/10/2017
Please send write the non-con smut scene! I hope you update soon!
Shiranai Atsune chapter 1 . 6/20/2017
I love it! Please more!

...non-con sex scene...
callyaoi chapter 1 . 5/28/2017
Bonjour que se passerait il si Akihito s'échappe avant qu'asami la viole ou si elle tombait enceinte après cette rencontre ? bonne soirée
ShinRinYin chapter 1 . 4/6/2017
is it to troublesome for you if you canw rite both censored and uncensored material? write the uncensored work as a seperate book or something if it's not a pain. thanks
5123 chapter 1 . 2/10/2017
Hehe great idea! I would say the sex scene next! Great work and please update soon! Thank you for sharing
Sam chapter 1 . 2/10/2017
The non-sex I think! Great work love the twist and please more soon!
Garta chapter 1 . 2/3/2017
Please continue, I'm sure it will be interesting!
Guest 1234567890 chapter 1 . 2/2/2017
I laughed. STD. Ha! Aki is hilarious.
On your note I would say do what you think is right to keep the story going. Like if someone wants the non-con scene but doesn't want it written you can write without going in detail or just skim through it and leave it to our imagination.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/1/2017
Bonjour que se passerait il si Akihito s'échappe avant qu'asami la viole ou si elle tombait enceinte après cette rencontre ? bonne soirée .
DarkAngel90111 chapter 1 . 1/24/2017
If you do, then give some warning please so I can skip it. Can fem Aki kick major butt? Like she does karate or kick boxing or some other martial art? Be really cool if she did.
Black Kitty77 chapter 1 . 1/23/2017
loved it soooo much! looking forward to more! do update soon! will be waiting!
Black Kitty77 chapter 1 . 1/23/2017
also. I would like to read the s*x scene since its not like Asami to be so...so innocent xD
Guest chapter 1 . 1/22/2017
I vote for skipping the non-con scene.
KitsuneMagic48 chapter 1 . 1/22/2017
I'm curious what will happen next. I love that she doesn't just roll over.
Callyaoi chapter 1 . 1/22/2017
Bonsoir quel plaisir de vous lire à nouveau, cette histoire est prometteuse et j'espère que nous aurons bientôt aussi la suite de votre autre fic bonne soirée.
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