This shit garbage trash naruto is the fucking same he still love ramen want to become hokage he is fucking retarded he still fucking is wearing that dumpster fire that you a jumpsuit sill is a Orange loving Little cunt still has a crush on pink Haired Bitch all that is different is that he on team ten this story is shit

You a cunt for make this naruto is Fucking retarded

I just found this story and powered through it. It's amazing and I love it. Please come out with another chapter soon

Great chapter, looking forward to the next one.

Until then.

Good fight scene with Sasuke. I assumed Naruto would have gotten further in Seals than Kakashi.
Waiting for the showdown with Ino.

Good chapter .

good chapter.
So naruto managed to defeat sasuke and finally come back to konoha.
Can't wait next chapter

Don't tell me ino and sasuke are dating!

Awesome story, I'm kind of hoping that Naruto will continue with the ANBU for a bit longer but I'm guessing that the Village will probably benifit more if he starts working more openly now and as he gains a reputation it'll help the Village attract more clients back.

I'm really looking forward to everyone's reactions to Naruto being alive especially continuing to see how Ino continues to react and Shikamaru's as well.

Until the next one.

Just favorited your story. Can't wait to see where you bring it next.

Great job please continue

Just binged this, and I have to say that I've enjoyed it, despite a few grammatical errors here and there. For the most part, things have been pretty solid.

With that said, the one thing I've taken particular issue with thus far is the climax of Naruto's fight with Kimimaro. While I understand that Naruto has a distaste for killing, I find it somewhat unbelievable that he'd hesitate after doing a stint in Anbu. It seems like exactly the kind of thing Sarutobi would have trained out of him. After all, leaving someone, whose capabilities you're unsure of, alive and possibly still able to take you out with them, is the height of stupidity and arrogance. Had it been anyone other than this Naruto in all of his glory, then they probably would have died.

To be short, for someone who's been having the fact that his peers (in Anbu) are much better fighters than he is smeared into his face, as well as the fact that he's been receiving training to face the most dangerous people in the world, it seems almost out of character to toy with someone of such a high caliber. Especially given the context of the situation.

Of course, what is Naruto without a dash of idiocy? This could very well serve to drive the lesson home, so to speak: that being to not play with your food.

At the end of the day, I'm not asking you to change anything, or to alter the way you write. I'm simply stating my opinion on a specific piece of the story I'm not satisfied with.

Thank you for sharing. I look forward to the next installment.

so the supposed narutoVSsasuke first big battle is finally happening.
Hope this time you plan naruto win without taking big damages. Otherwise it would only means that your naruto despite training is always as far behind to sasuke level as he was in the manga

I have a few questions:

How in the period of 2 years of being trained by Jiraiya and Sarutobi is Naruto Chunin level but Gaara reaches Kage level? (PLOT HOLE!)

Naruto learns techniques like Rasengan, Summoning Jutsu and other lightning Jutsu in a period of 3 weeks before the Chunin exam, however in 2 years he barely learns any new powerful Jutsu whilst under the guidance of two S ranked Shinobi? (PLOT HOLE!)

Even in the freaking anime (which was embedded with plot holes) Neji Hyuuga was a Jonin level Shinobi after 3 years (P.S. He didn't have two S ranked Shinobi training him)

I loved this story until Chapter 21. Maybe I am missing some stuff though and you can explain your line of thought as to why Naruto is still a Chuunin. Also, why in the 2 years didn't he train to become proficient in using the Kyuubi's Chakra? Just to add, I am not saying Naruto should be God-level or overpowered but the fact he isn't even a A Rank Shinobi (Which Sasuke easily was after his training) and "all naruto has been doing over the 2 years is training" is absurd. Anyways, hope to hear your response.

...stupid fanfiction formatting...

In my review of chapter 14 “It’s just,jiji” is supposed to be “It’s just, -jiji”, and “so issan” is supposed to be “so is -san”. Also, in my review of chapter 15, “ifneechan” is supposed to be “if -neechan”, “andniichan” is supposed to be “and -niichan”, and finally, in one big heap, “whereji is used instead ofjiji, sincejisan feels better thanjijisan” is supposed to be “where -ji is used instead of -jiji, since -jisan feels better than -jijisan”. Anytime I put a quotation mark immediately before a dash just got completely erased in the posting process.