Reviews for My Keeper
Didric chapter 8 . 3/31/2018
Please don't hate this chapter, I think it's one of the best yet, good job :-) (please update soon)
DeadMenPlaying chapter 8 . 2/8/2017
Nice
CdnChrgr chapter 8 . 2/7/2017
Your doing an awesome job! Even the chapters you say you hate are extremely good! Just a few spelling errors but we all make them. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for your next chapter :)
Guest chapter 7 . 1/25/2017
This chapter, and this story, are just fine. I am enjoying your story, and thank you for sharing it with us.
Guest chapter 4 . 1/21/2017
I hope Hiccup gets over his fears and reluctance and goes back to act on his love for Astrid.
Guest chapter 3 . 1/21/2017
Yeah, this is looking good, please keep going.
Aiacco chapter 3 . 1/21/2017
Don't worry about your english, is better than manu other story i read (but i'm not english too, so i'm not a good judge).
The story so far is really good (maybe a little futuristic with the "middle finger" in the second chapter).
And our prefered rider and Dragon speak to each other: are they telepatic? Is only between them or with other dragons too? And what happend to the other dragons?
Can't wait to find out
Guest chapter 3 . 1/21/2017
It's really good. I like the affect of how Hiccup departure had on people and can't wait to see what happens when he returns.
Anonymous Noob the 2nd chapter 6 . 1/22/2017
Please have more fluff from hiccup's dragons teasing him and Vice versa.
Anonymous Noob the 2nd chapter 5 . 1/22/2017
You got tiffs personality down perfectly:) if your open to suggestions please don't make Astrid a damsel in distress becuse she is a very strong and spirited women.
Theblackbird123 chapter 6 . 1/22/2017
Such chapter, much wow (insert doge here). Hiccup does know that looking directly at the sun will make him blind right?
Theblackbird123 chapter 5 . 1/21/2017
That mental state lol. By the way, how's Hiccup talking to the dragons? Does he know their language or does he have some kind of mental link or something like that?
Anonymous Noob the 2nd chapter 4 . 1/21/2017
Good chapter:)
Theblackbird123 chapter 4 . 1/21/2017
Another really good chapter. There are some conjugation errors, but overall it was well written. I can't wait for the next one!
Theblackbird123 chapter 3 . 1/21/2017
This one is really good, please update soon! :D
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