Reviews for Motherly Affection
KHARAKI TAKAN chapter 3 . 1/18/2019
Interesting with the Heterochromia don't really see the point silver eyes are cooler. In the RWBY universe anyway.
blackmailingqueen chapter 7 . 12/22/2018
The wait was worth it. I really liked the chapter!
Guest chapter 7 . 12/20/2018
WOOOOO!
TheNiemand chapter 7 . 12/20/2018
DUUDE! I thought this story was dead.

And nice build on Dragonslayer. I just laughed at the final scene. If this came from the older Yang many would think of something suggestive. But she is six years old here so its chill but still nice work on that.
Edward Verdant chapter 3 . 12/20/2018
So she just gives birth and immediately gets out of the bed?

I think you'll find that's not how that works :P
SouthernGentleman11 chapter 7 . 12/20/2018
Holy crap, I thought this was dead.
merendinoemiliano chapter 7 . 12/20/2018
Very nice and sweet chapter, i had as well these problems. Best of luck with nexts events and Dragonslayer Building. Qrow's upgrade sounds awesome,i'm also planning of giving It some in my Fate crossover. Good work and nice holydays.
blackmailingqueen chapter 6 . 7/4/2018
I love this! I really hope you decide to continue it!
merendinoemiliano chapter 1 . 7/3/2018
Update soon, please.
merendinoemiliano chapter 3 . 4/14/2018
Return soon,please
RWBYSTRQ chapter 6 . 1/1/2018
So worth the wait! Keep it up!
TheNiemand chapter 6 . 1/1/2018
I love this chapter, nice way to bring Jaune into it. If this was a anime I would say that you set up the pairing for Dragonslayer, but alas is not so. Or is. Not sure. Is your story after all.

And one missspell here I found. Yang said 'They wont let Jaune do she want' I think you accidently added a s to the he. The rest of the senctence is fine, given that 5 years old generally arent good at gramar.
...She is 5 years old at this time right?
merendinoemiliano chapter 6 . 1/1/2018
Glad you came chapter is very good, sweet and funny, i liked the little moment of Dragonslayer bending and i can't wait to see how Jaune will develop(maybe write also thath his sisters forbidden and shopkeeper in their town to give him book useful for an huntsman in training and materials like Dust and component), other than the other charachters this family will meet(Maybe Adam could be adopted by Tai and Raven and become Yang's big brother).I'glad you liked my theory(but after volume 5 i doubt it will be true) and it you want also mine about Salem and the Grimms for use, pm up the good work and see you later, i hope you're enjoying this volume and will have a great year.
Guest chapter 6 . 12/31/2017
For want of a nail. Raven decides to be a proper mother and things start chaning from there. Loved how you had Yang and Jaune meet early. And i can already see how this meeting will make the latter a more competent huntsman down the line and all
Mata Nui chapter 5 . 11/2/2017
This is quite a good story. I quite hope to see more chapters in time and hope you continue to write.
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