Reviews for Dragon Sagas: Series 2: Book Two
FightingChampion chapter 27 . 1/24
So you decided to add super Saiyan 4 ? Hmm, interesting! Also one thing needs to be cleared up! Yusuke is NOT a martial artist. Yusuke has no technique. Even yomi states he has no fighting style. Yusuke is a brawler. He relies on his speed, power, toughness, and instincts. Genkai only trained him in improving his physical abilities and taught him spiritual techniques. Yusuke is not a martial artist. You can easily see it in the way he fights. This is a common mistake many yu yu hakusho fans make.
skelly78 chapter 27 . 12/28/2019
Good as always. Could use a proofreader but nothing major. I am curious, what is an antecedent supposed to be? Someone from the previous universe or something from this universe? I mean there are beings in ‘this’ universe that are pretty ancient. Hard to see anything predating them, anything major anyway.
skelly78 chapter 26 . 12/7/2019
Good too see your back at it. Could use a little proof reading to fix some typos but good story as always.
The Dark Rose chapter 25 . 9/6/2019
This is the best crossover story I ever read so keep up with the amazing work also can u please make a Naruto and Yu Yu Hakusho crossover story as well.
skelly78 chapter 24 . 7/22/2019
Hmm. I’d say the Phoenix though I guess it depends if you are using the carol from the mcu that’s powered by an infinity stone or the one from the comics that’s just a very powerful mutant.
Fightingchampion chapter 24 . 7/22/2019
Good chapter! But there is no way in hell Carol anywhere near the Phoenix force. Hell she shouldn't be stronger or anywhere near black adams level. She's strong but she isn't that strong. You are severely overestimating her in your story. Yusuke hasn't fought or trained in years so I will let that one slide. Anyway good story.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/7/2019
Basically it's a cross over story that plays out like normal except with differences and what if senerios like what if Goku faced tugero in the dark tournament finals instead of yusake something like that
Guest chapter 1 . 7/7/2019
This is just a thought but how about making a future story where the characters from DBZ like Goku Vegeta and the other z fighters we know somehow end up in the yu yu hakisho universe the episodes play out like the anime except with some differences and the characters they cross paths with characters like height botan Keiko yusake kwabara kurama and the others characters we seen during the show and at some point even fight each other at some point to test each other's powers to see how strong they are and events like the dark tournament and fighting senswei(not sure how to spell his name but he's the guy that loves fighting with his legs has seven different personiltys as for parings go I say have Goku end up with botan (for obvious reasons) yusake and Keiko suzerio (kawabaras sister) and Vegeta and the last paring kawabaras and yukina as for when it takes place I say after when Kid Buu was defeated and have their current power during the time they were fighting kid Buu I can see some unique things happen in this kind of cross over story especially how very similar these two shows are u don't have to have all the other z fighters involved just have it be Goku and Vegeta and another idea came to mind having to see Goku and Vegeta face the tugero brothers in the dark tournament would be quite interesting but at some point he batreys older tugero like in the show and sends him packing so it would be just him and the younger tugero facing them
Fightingchampion chapter 23 . 6/18/2019
Awesome chapter but what about the arrancars ? This affects them to if it affects the earth because hueco mundo relies on the balance to keep existing so it would make no sense if grimmjow, neliel, and harribel don't get involved. Shunsui in the Can't fear your own world novel which takes place after the thousand year blood war recruited them to be apart of his own special team design to stop tokinada and his minions. So he would for sure recruit them again for something like this. Post-timeskip Grimmjow, harribel, and neliel are on good terms with shunsui and soul society so I'm sure they would listen. I mean you don't have to mention the novel if you haven't read it but I'm pretty sure they would get involved if they hear that it effects their world to.
Anonymous chapter 19 . 10/1/2018
The stories are good but i just wish that u atleast in one story bring Goku and Vegeta in the main play as fighting along side the warriors
divineboss2000 chapter 20 . 7/22/2018
Sweet, I’m glad you’re back homie. Great things are in store for the heroes and the celestials won’t know what hit em! Looking forward to next chapter
Starkiller the Warrior chapter 19 . 7/18/2018
Are you going to have Shadowcat reunite with Caliwone in Other World?
Valeyard1980 chapter 19 . 6/3/2018
A most impressive story thus far.
It seems more like A Series Of Unfortunate Events.
I love the unpredictability, the possibilities, the countless probabilities being explored.
The fights see me to have even more heat, more at stake than ever before. I absolutely love the Passion the heroes have. And Caliwone as a Super Saiyan God? Will it be enough? Will Helena somehow "survive"?
You have me so excited. Thank you
SIERRA 117 chapter 19 . 5/21/2018
This is awesome stuff. Please continue
divineboss2000 chapter 19 . 3/26/2018
Bbbbbbbboi Black Adam is awesome! The fight was awesome! And I don’t think Helena is dead, which is also Awesome! Looking forward to many of the things
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