I totally love it
But you can continue this story make more chapters
You have so much imagination
I love it. Thank you so much
Looking forward to seeing more of this .

Love it.

You’re awesome
I love it.

Yes
Please

This has always confused me, but where did Akihito get the blazer?

What was the first song he was dancing to? Would love to know!

This was one of the best fanfictions that I ever read. It was long but it was never boring. You didn't drag the drama scenes and the fluff scenes were balanced. You had some grammatical errors but nothing that would hinder reading. I'm happy to have stumbled on your story

Thank you alot for this story ! I really enjoy it it was great

Hi!
It’s my first time reading any of your works. It’s entertaining but I would just like to point out some observations I git from your story. I don’t mean to be rude but your story seems to be heavily inspired by two great stories of two authors under the finder series. These stories are clearly seen on the choice of plot and flow of your stories. I just want to point it out because, those stories are ones that I love so much by heart and I follow those authors a lot; so I was kinda talen aback when I noticed great similarites in the stories. These are Business as Usual by Kadzuki Fuschoin and Secret Admirer by Setsuna24. Though you give your own spin in the stories, I hope you’d be able to develop a very original take on your stories. Because really, it’s such a shame if your stories will be patterned only from plots by other authors. Good luck in the future.

I LOVE IT...OH GOD its so wonderfull..!
From the firat scene i read the scene of Asami and Akihito daily love life ..I knew on that time i've been shot to dead..
Aaaahh ..My fangirl sense are tingling..i just love them both
Gratitude to Yamane Ayano Sensei _!
Her story are sooo Awesome and you as one her fans had make a good job doing another version of her original works..We as readers highly praised you too _

The storyline, the plot, the scene and the words..
Every single thing in this story ARE PERFECT!
It was one of the great story i will never gonna forget in my intire life..i swear..hahahah..
And no worries, the end of the story is splendid
Though a bit funny to see Feilong suddenly make the first appearance in the last scene..hahahah..
And woohoo Akihito and Mikhail in a good terms?
Sooo not see that coming..
And Akihito Pull Asami for the searing deal kiss at the end of it are making heart thumping so loudly ..hahah..
so sweet..Ok now i'm turning into Hatsu..Or God That Bitch
Hate her VERY VERY VERY MUCH..
I suddenly want to hate you for not making Asami makes the special torture service for her..Hahahah..Let Her Pay!
But yeaah , what we can do Akihito will never stoop that low..huhuhu..Precious boy..

By the way ,Thank you sooo much for putting soo much effort and time to finish this awesome story..Thanks a lot.
Keep up the great work , You are a great writer and
We readers know it..Good luck for finishing other story,Fighting!~

i like finder series, and i love akihitoxasami love team... do refreshing i wish for kou and mikhael story .

Thank you so much for this history! It was refreshing and really cute and with good dialogue... I really enjoyed the sun and moon reference... I know that you took inspiration from Business as Usual wich kinda make me feel odd but it was amazing anyways#!

Like reading Asami's honest looks at himself and his feelings for Takaba .

This IS some thing I wish Takaba would do in the manga. state ownership of Asami. T think Asami would welcome it. loved this chapter.

Greaaattt story! Congratulations, i loved it. Hope to read a new one soon