Hope a new chapter comes out soon

Please update this! It has a better story line than canon thus far!

I really like to know more about Salem past and these nightmares she still have about her daughters. Adam thinking by injecting himself with that power will give him more strength but it will be his downfall. Cinder is still feeling her humiliation badly and I bet she will be in a surprise to see who else is in the tribe.
That was a surprise to hear that Owl is related to Yang by blood and now want to see some baby pics of Yang when she was little and when Raven reveal it to Yang, she just outright blurt it out. Ozpin is training Weiss and Jaune to be better with their new powers and funny how it it turning out. Leonardo has two choices and that is to either be put down or redeem himself.

I love this story! It has a far better plotline than the original especially the path that Yang was put on. Please update soon this has given each character more depth and intrigue! I am dying to know the result of the whole team seeing eachother again! I hope you're doing well. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

I'm so glad you're back! I love grandpa owl it was super cute and I really want to know what happens with neo. Please update soon!

Unles im very much mustaken Ozpin dident bolive Yang was a Godess in mortal form. so his suden trust in Yang as a bit jaring. apart form that grate chapter i always ijoy reading them. alos when Yang meets back up with ehr frinds i hope they are actuly impreset with her pwoer. so far they seem to take eveyr thing to easaly.

So glad you addressed the problems of being a large bandit tribe. Owl being a grandparent is nice. I’m still confused on how Weiss became maiden.

I’m thinking some kind of dojo warrior clan or mercenaries.

Blake doesn’t know? Uh oh

PS- is yang going to have a dark counterpart introduced?

KEEP BEING AWESOME!

Glad to see that you're doing alright. Hope everything's going alright. And I do like what you added to Salem's story. Wasn't a fan of how she was handled in the show, especially since it kinda put all the blame on her as opposed to the people who abused her.

Good to have you back and great chapter. Apart me wished Blake and sieanna ran into someone yang had rescued so just so Blake can at least get a hint. Have you read any fire emblem fic with fem bey and edl

Oh, nice job as always. I love how your worldbuilding on the tribe. And that night are at the same end, damn. Take care. I've been playing Fate Grand/Order, like usual

I love the idea of the faunus turning into their animal, so original! I wonder what CRWBY and RT would think haha
Awesome story, was hard to accept yang as the MC but hey it’s an AUand yang is definitely my favorite character too

please update

Noooo not a cliff hanger! I really want to know who it is that came to see neo !

if it's that bastard that hurt her and not Roman, I will sue!

I really do love the new and improved Crescent Rose and when they met Lionheart it was something like that. So Jaune will have Ozpin in his body now instead of Oscar, that will be something to see because Jaune relationship with him is at an all time low. That is a better way for Neo to appear than joining with Cinder but I want to see Watts get experimented on like he did to Neo.