The last scene reminded me of TMNT 2012 when the Turtles were allowed to surface for the first time XD

Very strange ending...

Norman you little asshole! You did not just do that!

Well shit...this is really not good.

Once it was stated that his memory was lost, or broken for the most part, I knew where this was headed. Don't get me wrong, this is an understandable choice for the plot's progression.

Norman really is cunning, using bits and pieces of the truth and mixing them with lies to manipulate Otto into becoming his unknowing servant...makes him dangerous.

Otto was really quick to assume Spidey was an enemy, though it seems his passions and his perception of Norman having the same made him a bit too quick to trust him.

Regardless of what's happened, this was quite a unique twist of a what if for the start of the series.

(What, so you're done with this? (Not saying anything one way or another, I'm just surprised.))

In the situation, I can't say I blame him for his fear.

He's in an unfamiliar location, surrounded by people he doesn't know after he had been beaten by his foes (if I remember right, haven't read this story since the previous chapter, sorry).

I imagine Peter would be afraid of Fury. Like him or not, the man has an imposing presence that makes many people intimidated by him.

Fury really should try to be a bit more compassionate to some people.

White Tiger and Nova are unimpressed with Spidey, not surprising. They were the ones that took the longest for Spidey to bond with. Iron Fist and Power Man warmed to him much more quickly, as I think Peter will come to bond with them at first too.

Fabulous job as always.

Aww. Otto, no. Poor bby

nice job

Ah, the story is meeting it's end. As bittersweet as it is, I understand looking forward to an ending. Perhaps one day though, a sequel might be possible... But that's all up to you!
Loved the chapter and loved the story.

Huzzah! A chapter! Thanks OfficialUSM!

Yay! My spidey!

Yeah, it was sad, but the ending was bittersweet, and caused me to giggle. Now I can't stop imagining Spidey with a pink princess dress over his spidey suit, swooning into the arms of his knights in multicolored spandex

very good

Better late than never? Eh...

Iron Fist alone should've been enough to bring down that wall. (Considering his fist is powerful enough, at least in the comics, to bring down a helicarrier.) But no, it's not unreasonable considering their powers.

The group really sent Norman into a fury alright. Having to leave his...basically his home...and to leave behind the one who could've unwillingly given him what he desired...there's little doubt about the level of his rage.

In whatever way Norman reacts to this...it won't be good.

As depressing as it was, I adore the princess carry me away. I'm sure he would have said that to any of the team... Well maybe not Nova.