| Reviews for Awakening to Battle |
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ulttoanova chapter 17 . 7/29 I really love this story and can't wait for your next chapter. |
AzaiNagamasa chapter 17 . 7/20 When's the next update? By the way, I'm leaning towards ShiLu (Shirou x Lucina) more than RoShi (Robin x Shirou) in pairing. |
Guest chapter 17 . 5/15 Despite some minor complaints about this story it is well written and I appreciate being able to read it. Please continue. |
Guest chapter 14 . 5/15 Just a note, youre using very english centric names for your OCs in a world like Fire Emblem it makes more sense to try and make up names that fit better in their world. |
Guest chapter 13 . 5/15 On par with Excalibur? Lol Excalibur is a divine construct and an A Noble Phantasm at the least. |
Guest chapter 12 . 5/15 Not a single anti army noble phantasm. That is some nerfing right there. Even if he couldnt wipe out all of them there are several noble phantasms he could use to intimidate them or route them. Even without that i doubt that men would keep coming at him so eagerly once he fought through a small army without any large magic. Also I dont see why he wouldn't target Aversa besides Plot. He targets commanders as much as he can so it doesn't seem outlandish that he would devote a good noble phantasm to Aversa. |
Guest chapter 11 . 5/15 Vasavi Shakti, Arondight-Overload, Clarent, Durindana/Durandal, Excalibur Galatine, Gungnir, Jizao Yizhen, Im just saying there are a ridiculous amount of anti army noble phantasms even if Shirou can't project something like Ea or Excalibur he should be able to project something enough to decimate armies. Even if it is something that exhausts him. |
Guest chapter 7 . 5/14 Shy would Lissa tell Emmeryn? |
Guest chapter 7 . 5/14 He totally just mentioned his world and she didnt notice |
Guest chapter 4 . 5/14 Given the two times now you've noted his clothing shouldn't he wear something else to not stand out? Lucina should be a bit confused about his attire as well. |
blackeye97 chapter 17 . 4/8 Please update this soon. I really adore this story. I've read it twice through before. |
Silly Thoughts chapter 11 . 4/7 I feel him saying he didn’t have the prana to utilise an Anti-Army class weapon to its full potential as to actually kill an army could be true, but he definitely has Anti-Army class weapons in his arsenal being Caladbolg it self is a Anti-Army class weapon able to wipe out a hill and those in its radius like a nuke. Carpet bombing a army to death wouldn’t even need him to look through his weaponry. (arondight-light of the lake) can Kill 500 people per use. And Excalibur as anti fortress weapon could destroy entire castles and the entire army inside. There are many noble Phantasm literally based around the killing of armies since well there slaying of armies or fighting them is what made them such. But I am fine with the concept he doesn’t have the power to use them to that level of damage/range as he doesn’t have the ability to use enough mana himself to make them viable options stuck using mostly his od for prana means even in this far more magical world he is still stuck with the smaller limit of power no matter the ability of the weapons he has stored. So still plays out the same either way. |
Dasgun chapter 17 . 3/16 \\\\ |
Finder18 chapter 13 . 2/16 Great chapter, Just had a few questions does Shirou ever take a shower? I mean he has been in a few battles, run across several miles. He has been in a sewer, He must stink. He then worked in a forge and has started cooking. Sorry, it broke the immersion, and it kept bothering me. But besides that it was great! |
Heinz von valain chapter 17 . 1/14 Amazing, bravo, fantastic’ahh awesome? I have no more words to say but good job in making the story i think you got a almost perfect not so distorted shirou. This makes it even better than a stupid knight that’s over powered, but your shirou is still a idiot though just a bit smarter. |