Well... Sherlock is seeing the light, at last - too late, but still. We'll see if there's anything he can do to redeem him in my eyes...
Now, Mycroft, continue to look after Greg! You wasted too much time, almost lost this second chance. Now hold on to your love with both hands!
CAN'T WAIT for more!

Oh no, poor Greg! (winces) BUT, at least he's awake - thank gosh! (BEAMS) No, SUPPORT HIM through this, Mycroft! SHOW HIM how much you want this second chance!
As for Sherlock... I'm still not sure if anything can salvage him in my eyes. (growls)
CAN'T WAIT for more!

I'm so disappointed in Sherlock that I have no words! What he did... It's something I'm not sure I'll EVER forgive him! Despicable! CRUEL, and absolutely horrific! Ruining his brother's happiness is one thing, but to do the same to a man who was supposed to be one his few friends... (shudders, and snarls)
Mycroft should've just told Greg what Sherlock was up to. Maybe being banned from all crime scenes would've opened that BRAT'S eyes. (growls)
I don't blame John that much. I ignore calls from random numbers all the time, and it looks like he didn't know Greg and Mycroft were a couple. But if I were him, I'd seriously reconsider whether I want to continue a relationship with someone like Sherlock...
Mycroft, you should've kicked everyone else out of the room instead of leaving yourself! Go back, stay there and tell Greg EXACTLY how much you love him, how much you want a second chance! It may be the only thing that can bring him back.
Please, PLEASE update soon!

What a compelling tale you're telling! (BEAMS)
(sighs and shakes head) In my book, Mycroft's failed and abandoned Greg he twice, now. First he gave up on their relationship for some RIDICULOUS reason. And now he behaved like he didn't know Greg AT ALL, and waited until the next day before digging out the truth.
I really, REALLY hope that Greg will be okay! My heart goes out to that poor thing, who's had his heart shattered and now THIS. (whimpers) As to whether I think Mycroft deserves a second chance with him or not, we'll see. He'll have to work VERY, VERY hard for it with how badly he's screwed up, twice now. (I feel so protective of Greg that Mycroft's going to have a REALLY hard time with me - sorry about that in advance...!) (chuckles sheepishly)
And if Sherlock actually had the NERVE to be against their relationship, he deserves a SMACK!
PLEASE, do update soon! I'm hopelessly addicted to this story and can't wait for more!