A real good one, thank!

What the fuck is this shit? She rapes him with her friends on the train and you are letting her off with a warning? It does not fucking matter if he was head boy or not at the time, this is disgusting

wtf

This was fucking great lmao. I actually got into the story and the characters, and you managed to make it somewhat canonical. Good job all around. And it was hot as fuck too, I jerk off to this all the time.

I really enjoyed this story.
The best part of it was the fact that it wasn't just a "smut" story. (as you called it)
You actually had a story behind it and had interactions with professors including Cho's mom to deepen the story.

bad

If I were in his shoes I’d be feeling extremely self conscious and most likely avoid all these women... I’d be thinking something must be seriously wrong with me. Harry is supposedly good looking, an amazingly gifted lover, a great person and he’s rumoured to be rich. He’s quite literally the perfect catch, but pretty much nobody wants to be with him for real. He should at least be cynical about emotions, but he doesn’t even consider that he’s only a momentary thing for Cho and she has no plans of dating him seriously.

I’ve always wondered why smut authors say cum is disgusting... I mean, I’ve only got my two exes as reference here but both seemed to like the taste and whenever I kissed them after, it never bothered me. Am I abnormal or do authors just have no idea about what’s normal, only assuming it’s gross?

I totally wanted him to sluttify draco lol

Wow. I've reviewed once before, but I'm really impressed. Writing smut for the opposite orientation is hard. I'm still discovering who I am, I wanna say I'm Bi, but I lean heavily more towards straight so I might just be a kinky straight person. In any case, I find that writing gay stories are harder for me be it woman on woman or man on man.
I'm also impressed that you managed to keep this story's plot at the same time as write a harem story. It's difficult and not a lot of writers are able to differentiate those two most of the time. Your approach was also very different from mist harem stories where the author tries to write one male (usually, I think I've seen maybe one or two harems with a female lead) having a serious (mostly sexual) relationship with like four or five girls. The ending was also really good. Open ended enough to leave things to the imagination but conclusive enough to come full circle.

I know this is literally titled a harem story, but it comes off (to me at least) as more of a just really sexual story. Like a bunch of sexual misadventures. I like how there's character and maybe plot, rather than just sex. Even if it is sex almost every chapter it feels like the story is moving. Honestly I hope it ends with harry and hermione or cho together. I think that with the current set-up, those two make the most sense. I guess harry and ginny could get back together, but personally I was never invested in that pairing. To be fair, i don't remember books 5 and 6 that well, and I also never read 7. It seems like harry and hermione won't get together (my true pair) because of how they told each other they're not interested in each other, but it's possible if you decide to build that up. I'm nit sure how serious this story is though, so I guess I'll just read on. Kudos and keep on writing.

ew

It was nice was sad it ended though.

Bruh that’s so wild.

Never sell yourself short, I loved the story, this is in my opinion a masterpiece.