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Guest chapter 2 . 8/31 That's nasty she slept with two different people im thinking what diseases are being spread |
malexfaith chapter 2 . 5/19 Thanks for sharing |
RavenSkyAngel chapter 2 . 5/17 Enjoyed chapter 1 immensely. Did not like chapter 2 so much. So everything that happened between Maura and Helene, the sex between them, was just okay with Jane? Jane didn't even feel upset that somebody else was fucking Maura in there other room? They didn't even talk about it? It's like all that matters to Maura is sex...with Helene. Then with Jane. It's just sex for Maura. That's all I see. Okay. That's it. Didn't enjoy chapter 2 so much. |
Guest chapter 2 . 5/17 This is so hot! Their sexy times are great! I love how you explain everything and I can actually feel and see it. |
Terri411 chapter 2 . 5/16 Entertaining chapter, Delightful writing, so sad to see this wonderful fanfiction END, but so looking forward to your next sweet update, thank you and HAPPY WRITING! :-))))))))))))) xoxoxoxoxo.. |
Guest chapter 2 . 5/16 You seductress you |
tika12001 chapter 2 . 5/16 Ohhh thank you so much for this update! |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/4/2018 It’ s a little messed up whit the names, but it is well written |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/30/2018 Would love to read a part two! |
Ojoyd chapter 1 . 12/10/2017 Would love to see you continue with this. I'm intrigued to see how Jane would now react with Maura given her knowledge of Helene and Maura's night together. It seems Helene is expecting everything to stay the same given she told Maura she'd see her again in March. How long can Maura keep this up and now that Jane knows of Maura's fantasy, how will Jane react? Can she remain on the outside looking in? Hope you consider writing more. Thanks, |
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 1 . 11/19/2017 Part 2? How old was Helene? |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/29/2017 Please, please please, PUH-LEESE update soon! |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/13/2017 This was incred. Would love a follow up. |
nrdhrd3 chapter 1 . 8/21/2017 OMG I NEED MORE OF THIS! |
EnterpriseCaptain7 chapter 1 . 7/8/2017 Holy Smokes this is so good and very HOT! Really hope you update very soon! |