You have some fun idea, for this stories of yours. I hope that yo continue with them in the future, and hope that by now thing on school be better. good luck

Ha, this is seen fun, you have some good idea here. sorry the hear the you get bully on school, I know what is feel, because I was bully too when I was on school. you should try more to make the teachers to hear you and do something. is sad the the one to suppose to keep a eye on that dont do anything.

wow when will she reveal herself and that she is alive?

I wonder what Astrid and Henry's back story here is?

really good job, keep up the great work!

I cant wait for Astrids back story

this story sounds really interesting, keep up the good work! word of advice though, for the next chapter and so on try to add a little more detail, and maybe how the characters r feeling. But other than that, really good!

amazing

wow will he love her also is this based off a movie that i can't remember the name of but i know it's coming soon?

If it is Astrid, she is kinda creepy here.

This is good so far:)

I'm sorry your friends have betrayed you. Perhaps you could find some new ones since they are not being good friends to you.

Weird and different but interesting ! Keep going ! Can't wait for more ! Please update soon !