Fantastic story thank you. You got ardyn in character very well.

Awesome thank you so much for writing this fantastic story.

I really enjoyed this, thank you for writing it.

I have to be honest with you: Ever since the end of chapter nine, I developed a strong dislike for Ardyn. So much to the point where I got emotional stress for several days in light of what happened to the chocobro crew. When I found out there were Ardyn fangirls, I was like: NOPE, NOPE, NOPE!
But, after reading your fanfic, its actually made Ardyn a little bit more tolerable, so props to you for writing him in such a more pleasing way. Keep up the great work!

Please update!

I'm hooked already, holy cow.

Enjoyed your fic very much so, seems you've got Ardyn's character down. A great read!

I loved this chapter. Ardyn is very well written, and I'm very excited to see what is going to happen

I really love the way you write,this is just GREAT,
let me assure you that you describe ardyn just perfectly, you totally get his personality.
(according to me) this is the best fic I've read in ages!
can't wait for the next chapter!
( sorry for the english, not my mother tongue , I'm french)

Best fic I have found so far !

OMG!

I'm so glad I've found someone who loves Ardyn as much as me! Probably one of my fav character of ffxv because of his looks, manners and twisted mind!

This is without hesitation the best story with him, it's so well written and entertaining. I love the female character also she's so lovely and authentic! Love love love!

Keep going girl!

:)

This Was just Great!

This was so emotional! It had me teared up at the end from the emotional rollercoaster. I can't wait to read the next chapter! Once again another amazing read! Thanks k you for updating!

I love this story! No, scratch that. I'm addicted to it! It is so well written! I can't wait to read more! Please update soon!

oh...my...god! That was amazing! So well written and intense! I NEED to know what happens next! *sob* please update soon!