nice

short

Thats a big wow. I hopr there is another chapter for this

OOOOOOH! So Old Charley used geass on his littlest boy twofold, Huh?

Yeah, C.C. remembers everything.

You know... Lelouch could have been... C.C.'d about the unfortunate events!

I have to say i like it. Definitely brings forth the idea that their relationship started alot earlier since C.C was already there when Suzaku met Lelouch. I was thinking of writing something similar for the pair, but this is definitely a little gem.

let see how their relationship developed from C.C. perspective :)

Is this a one shot or are you planning more chapters? I think it's be good as either. I like the way you wrote the Lelouch and C.C. dynamic, easily the most interesting dynamic in all of anime. It would be cool to see more of your take on it. And I really liked how you tied in their past with that scene from R2 where they meet again for the "first time."

Just to say it, this first comment was mine, I don't know why I wasn't logged in. Should you need a litele inspiration or someone who beta-reads for you,( or at least tryes to do sow) just send me a PM.

Well, what to say about this story?
I don't know, but 't wait fo more. I think this won't be one of this fanfics that tell a bombastic new story, but one that could tell about the relationship between Lelouch and C.C.
One of the few relationships in any show that was interested in. I think, in tis way this could be a very interesting fanfic, and I should like to know how it will continue, and if Lelouch will be able to change C.C. to be more positive about her live. Also, it would be interesting if you could find a better way to bring peace to the world than kill Lelouch.
Your writingstil is really a thing of its own and I hope you will keep it that way.
Please excuse my bad English, but it is not my mother language.
Looking forward to read more of this.