At first glance, it looks like the punctuation is better in this chapter. It might just be me, but I’m not loving the point of view. Let’s see what Nyssa is doing in town.

I am a little surprised that early in the chapter there was no mention of Laurel Lance by the newscaster. I feel the punctuation could use some improvement. There are places where a period is needed instead of a comma. I also don’t like how similar the fic is to the actual show. But that certainly makes it easier to write.
Best of luck and I hope to see some growth.

please continue this story,it's a good story :)

Really wish this kept going

Hi I really love this story and was wondering if u will continue writing it. Thanks for the answer

This has been a great read, a pity it seems to be dead though I do hope you continue it one day.

Update please! I’ve read this story twice this past month and I would love to see it finished!

I know that considering the last update was Feb 2017 that this story is probably dead but damn if it wasn’t good. I’m gonna follow it for now in case you decide to revive it. If not, I wish you the best in whatever else you do.

- Gen

Please update!

Coming back to this story?

This is a great story please finish and try to add more of olover fighting please

Great chapter.

Please keep Tommy and Laurel alive. They are so cute together.

Great chapter.

Why SaraxFelisity? I'm loving SaraxHelena!