Continue it however you like. But, I'd personally like to see how you'd write it in a more normal style. Though, I'm really enjoying it as is.

This was a fantastic read well done I can’t wait to see were this goes

I like the way you portray the battles with poetry and temperature, I gives it a rare, unique feel and emotion, like a dance that so few are afraid or unable to try. Instead on getting stuck on the details in the battle you make it seem like a sort of dance with how smooth you manage to make detail, temperature, battle, and poetry you weave together to make this splendid story that you've decided to share with us.

This is so sad ;.;

So beautiful and amazing and absolutely different to what I usually love.
I usually adore stories that the writer brings the story to life, a story filled with words that you can feel and relate.

Usually these stories are long or just one shots but each one of them are complex in writing, a lot of describing and long paragraphs yet yours is an oddity that I fell in love with and I cannot wait for other chapters

Yea, this fic resembles poetry, and isn't something someone not familiar with the series should read (because they would be lost).
This requires quite a ton of imagination, but it's AWESOME.

Really enjoyed this fic. The way you tell the story with small snippets brings a level of tension to the story that conventional story telling does not convey as well. Really looking forward to the next chapter.
Cheers.

I really like it and would very much like to see you continue write like this. Maybe going for a more normal style as she gets more and more emotional?

This is way better tbh. Than those shitty s-i stories boasting a female kirito

This is so good! Great writing and i really like the flow.

Depressing, but I love it. So much mystery in the writing, but so much mystery (I read this after reading "SAO: Century Voyage", so yeah).

Love the detached style and this Kirito. She's badass and beautiful. I can relate with her loneliness and depression.

Yay! A new chapter! Good job on it and I can't wait for the next one! Take your time tho. Quality over quantity!

Love the story its great and would love to read more of it.

Amazing can't wait for the next chapter.