"The Doctor grinned the grin he'd learned from Captain Jack." Even though both David Tennant and Christopher Eccleston had it from the moment they first appeared.

When she first met him, she was sarcastic. But not when she became a full-time companion. Not to mention that the Doctor doesn't do things like blame the TARDIS, or react to others like that.

And really, Donna doesn't speak to the Doctor like that.

Good chapter. Thanks for the update. Good luck with your writing. Don’t feel rushed to write anything just write when it comes to you. :)

thanks so much for the update! I am really looking forward to seeing where this is going.

Seriously, if anyone else saves the day in Doctor Who, has the Doctor ever said "I could do better"?

Donna complains about not landing somewhere interesting, and the Doctor blames the TARDIS. Instead of saying why it IS interesting.

Because he doesn't influence what they see.

In Mummy On The Orient Express, the Doctor showed the physic paper to someone, and was then surprised by what they read on it.

Or at least, that's not how the Doctor uses it.

Was "definitely not a couple" deliberately put there by the Doctor? Because that's not how it works.

Just a word about the crossover between Doctor Who and Alex Rider you reviewed. "Definitely not a couple" meaning they're in denial? And the Doctor doesn't call companions assistants, and has never said that it's the TARDIS's fault, not his, that they've landed somewhere disappointing. He would just argue that it isn't.

You have this on wattpad? I thought that I read all there is about AR on wattpad, like on ffnet.

I love it! Thanks so much for sharing!

Shit... Jones. God fuckin damn it... Somebody make sure that Jones gets her ass handed. Pretty please with a cherry on top...

(Loved how casually Wolf revealed one of the deepest secrets in the world... And the reactions-oh yes. Those will be beautiful)