I love tis a lot

Im so glad i clicked... so good!
Excellent writing, and interesting plot. Ty for taking the time to write it ;)

Lol that was amazing!

I hope you remember to write part 3, that's hot

Are you coming back with part three? Still can't manage to know what are, lol!

Please update soon! I really want to read the oart three haha x

holy moly what did i just read lol now this is good Royza smut, of course they would make a bet in the middle of it lol

I'm dying for part three. Still only half sure what the numbers mean, but this is still one of the best fanfictions I've read.

LMSDJFHKJ only Royai would stop in the middle of sex to make a bet I'm crying.
Also, as you know I googled vibrators in the 1910's and RIZA IS SO BRAVE FOR LETTING HIM PUT THAT THING ANYWHERE NEAR HER HAHA.
I'm also so here for Roy literally worshiping Riza like YOU WORSHIP YOUR WIFE LIKE THE GODDESS THAT SHE IS ROY.
HARDER COLONEL HAHAH I LAUGHED WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?
No but in all seriousness, holy hot! I can't believe this is your first time writing smut because that was incredible and so well written!
And please remember to write part three soon because yes we just all need more of this in our lives.
Thank you for blessing us all with this!

rip me. im ded from nosebleed

omg! I remember reading this not too long ago on tumblr and feeling a nosebleed come on /; I also remember a lot of flailing and fangirl giggling bahaha! I feel this definitely deserves more love bc I loved this! i loved loved loved their dialogue and it's always awesome when a writer flips the switch from serious to sassy Riza just right.

I liked this a lot! It's good!