Osiosi xd

... Bob. It was Bob. Bob was in charge of picking the name. *Slowly Backs away from Bob*

Wow, don't think I've ever seen a fic where Roman was a Faunus. Just that alone is enough to make me wanna follow this story.

You know, I've always wondered why Torchwixk keeps one eye covered. Now I know! This is a great Neo x Roman fic, please update soon!

I love that plot twist! With Roman being a Faunus. I always did wonder why he always kept his hair covering his one eye and I think it was clever using that fact and elaborating on it.

YO THAT’S A PLOT TWIST– I LOVE IT

Why, so much action! And the fact Roman feel so bad when he knew she's mute, that's cute!
I really love the way you write this story, that's great! Awesome!

That's really nice! I would totally love to see that in the serie! Well write!

This is a very enjoyable read. But may I suggest finding a beta reader or maybe just going through it a second time before uploading. There where quite a number of repeated words and some sentences seemed to be incomplete. A good trick I use it to read a section out loud word for word and that helps me find mistakes and sentences that don't read very well. Hope that helps. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I FUDGE PUCKING LOVE THIS! especially the end

This is becoming something really good, do take breaks though. Wouldn't want you to burn out your creativity so quickly.

Awww, this is so cute! I'm only one chapter in, but I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it! Neo and Roman are some of my actual favs, and you've written them beautifully!
Much love,
PrettyLittleMonster Xxx

Update is going to be delayed for a bit guys, my progress on the chapter was lost and I had a lot revised but now I'm long past my train of thought and basically I'm back at square one. FML.

Fun stuff, always nice to see more Gelato. I look forward to seeing more of this.

I'm definitely invested in this fic.