cool story bruh

ha ha no but really i love this one too :)

Please update I want to know what happens next

BIRLLIANT Chapter
sorry. I only JUST THIS SECOND Got to the story AND I have 27More to read
;-; LONG List... But all in all Great Chapter

i live to read this story
everyone teasing Pearl and Pearl overreacting and being carried by Garnet made my day
i'm just waiting for the first kiss between two of the mains omg

This is so cool! Heh, Crystal Gems Garnet As A Car Or Something Similar To Prevent Pearl From Being Late Formation Activate! I am honestly so excited I love this story so much..!

so much happened in this chapter that I loved!

Peri needing to 'take a moment think'

Yellow P being the butler, and grating on Peri's nerves ( I'm torn between her being a complete asshole to peri, or in my mind thinking she's more ike Geoffrey from the fresh prince of bel air )

Pearl's nap fetish being confirmed

Peri just being Peri

Garnet, best pillow and her future vision

Lapis babysitting Connie

Bismuth's expert waffle tips

Amy being Amy

such a great chapter, loved it all, the dialogue alone in the opening scene with the texting was great in itself, and the interaction between the CG's and Lapis is on a rocky but in my opinion slowly strenghtening level.

You did a great job, and cannot wait to read more in future

This was the gayest thing you have ever done bless you for giving me good thought's of Garnet's abs before bed.

Bismuth is probably shaping up to be my favorite so far, she's so full of life from only one episode to work off of (Granted, she has a looooooooot of character in that one long episode)

The. SB5 reference. You didn't.

I cannot even. I love this story and can't wait for the next one. Which I assume you're working on considering the last edit was 15 hours ago

I am in love with this AU, seriously you gotta keep going, the characters are written so well and the dialogue and interaction has me ensnared

Polygems with lapis is gonna be great !

will we see some Jasper in coming chapters ( I'm so used to see human AU's where Jasper and Amethyst are sisters, did you plan for them to be sibilings or maybe even half siblings or are they completely unrelated?)

Lapis is truly Lapissed XD

i get so so excited every time i see this fiction has updated

AND I WAS ABOUT TO GO BATSHIT MAD OVER THE FACT U REFERENCED CARMILLA BUT NOOOOOOOO
of COURSE it wasn't a reference unlike literally EVERYTHING else in your fics
C'MON it could've reference the sword Carm used in season 1 OR SMTH

ahem, apart from that, another chapter to adore. i absolutely love your writing style, it has a unique personality
im starting to believe this is my favourite polygems fic by now
this review is all over the place
and i really want to smoosh Lapis into Pearl despite having literally -5 interest in Pearlapis
Lapithyst is also looking real nice rn
TBH im not a big shipper of Lapis in ANYTHING but Lapidot but this polygems fic is an exception to that

Why do I love this so much? I LOVE IT!

I really really love this history so please keep going ill be waiting for the next chapter

insufferable noodle arm prick
same

but seriously i loV THIS I LOVE THIS I LOVE THIS SO MUCH
please tell me Pearl couldn't study in the library bc Amethyst actually was making out with her

omg i fucking love this story sO MUCH
THAT TEXTING SCENE MADE ME CRACK UP MYYY GOOOODDDD
just everyone leaving made me want to cry bc its something i'd totally do
and Lapis swearing her ass off at a pillar
bless this chapter
also knew the second 'laugh' and 'wheezy' were together, it had to be Amethyst
called out nerdy interrupting comment as Pearl too, but i almost mistook Bismuth as Jasper
oh man, i really love this
though i'm not a fan of prosthetic Peridot (it seems a bit overdone, like the whole angsty grieving obsessive Pearlrose trope) (WAIT U HAVE TROPE IN YOUR NAME WHA)
but i love this nonetheless

Brilliant Chapter.
Glad to see you Planned ahead instead of just Working through it as it pops up.

See you in the Next one ;)

BlackKnight_Rose