Reviews for The Flame And The Night |
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![]() ![]() ![]() HARRY POTTER DEATHLY HALLOWS QUOTE DUMBLEDORE |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it, I agree I would much rather be a blacksmith and getting ripped no doubt. |
![]() ![]() MUST HAVE SEQUEL |
![]() ![]() YASS LOVING THIS |
![]() ![]() I am going to say I enjoy the original concept of the fire gift to hiccup. The hole story is almost word for word the movie. You changed very little and that is sad. |
![]() ![]() Totally Frozen scene right there. THAT'S SOOOO AWSOME WHAT YOU DID THERE! Sorry for the yelling:) |
![]() ![]() Great chapter but a few sentences annoyed me, btw it's spelt Bola. Annoying sentences: "Your u can't lift a hammer, you can't swing an axe," Gobber lists. "You can't even through one of these." He lifts up a bolae, and someone takes it from the window, and uses it on a gronkle. "Maybe not. It this will through it for me." I put a hand on my. Newest invention: the mangler. Its basically a bow that shoots blolas on wheels, but it worked! Edited sentences: "You can't lift a hammer, you can't swing an axe," Gobber lists. "You can't even throw one of these." He lifts up a bola, and someone takes it from the window, and uses it on a Gronkle. "Maybe not. But this will through it for me." I put a hand on my newest invention: The Mangler. It's basically a bow that shoots bola's on wheels, but it worked! Sorry but it was bpthering me - |
![]() ![]() ![]() *Reads the first word of the chapter* ... ... ... ...Watch yo profanity! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Vikings had none of the modern day curses. It is more likely that they would have invoked detitys |
![]() ![]() The quote from Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows is "Of course it is happening inside your head, but why on earth should that mean it is not real?" - Albus Percival Wulfric Brian Dumbledore |
![]() ![]() ![]() i loved the story but everything was running a little too fast and it was not really lengthened but i liked it none the less and i hope that when you get to writing more stories and manage to put more into your stories that you might revisit this one and make a new one with the same kind of story but just a bit longer cause i really enjoyed it and i hope that it is longer later on though hehe anyway ill leave it at that and yeah hehe cya |
![]() ![]() ![]() ahhhh i love this so much |
![]() ![]() ![]() ahhhhhh the feels man the feels are hitting me hard |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story is awesome love it keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() Sequel sequel sequel PLEEEEEEEEEEAASE :) |