Sad but sweet! I'm so glad you added some good Harry and Ron moments!

So well written. So sad TT

Awe. So sad! Very well written, though.

I loved this! I love how there was this really interesting progression through the story. Ron worrying about money at the beginning and the ending being so heartbreaking. IT was almost (and I really mean almost) a full circle in a way. Despite knowing exactly what was going to happen, I still was wishing so desperately that it wouldn't happen. I couldn't help hoping for a happy ending.

I liked that you included Harry in the story and how he was included. It was a detail added to the story that seemed to give it a little more depth. The choice that poor Ron had to make was awful. It wasn't really a choice in the end and I could feel myself tearing up.

What really managed to make this story so amazing was the ending. Hermione's character in the last section was written so amazingly well and I seriously can't fault you. Her heartache and realisation. Her anger at Ron despite knowing it wasn't his fault and knowing he was only trying to be strong and the heartbreaking question. ["Is his name going to be Hugo or Alex?"] I can't even imagine being asked that question or having to ask it.

This was a really amazing!

Wow that felt like a kick to gut at the end. Thus us really well written and I look forward to more of your work.

For someone that hates Ron and the Romione pairing, you did a really great job with this. I sympathised with both Ron and Hermione, and I think you portrayed them both very well. I definitely can see Ron hiding his pain in front of Hermione in order to support her, and I can see her being slightly upset at his lack of emotion, but ultimately realising that he is holding it back for her.

I like how Hermione was the one that wanted three or four kids, while Ron was more hesitant. I think this makes a lot of sense considering that Hermione is an only child and Ron is from a big family.

Rose was adorable, and I loved the line about her mum carrying two babies but not giving her at least one baby sister.

The moment Hermione woke up and found out that one of her sons had died was heartbreaking, as well as the part where she looks at Hugo and thinks about how she should be holding two babies. I completely understand her refusal to have another child after losing her son. Like she said, the whole nine months would be full of nothing but stress and fear.

Great job.

sorry she lost one of her babies. thank you