Well this leaves me somewhat bemused. Being lazy, I am not fond of riddles or braintwisters, if you will. However this story is so charming, so entrapping, so well written that my enjoyment was in no way diminished, and that is your accomplishment. Time travel twists tra la la ...

Ah, the pros and cons of reordering time. Very interesting premise, I wonder where in time their next meeting would be, also what is the exact nature of the brand, and how it is affected/affects them with the shift in timeflow. Such a pity that this is only a one shot, oh well (not being pushy, just wistful)
'Til next time :)

Absolutely love it!

Amazing!

I don't usually review things but this was such an absolute delight to read. I want so much more it hurts.

This is absolutely beautiful, refreshing, and just what I needed. I miss discovering beautifully interesting Labyrinth fanfictions. Thank you for posting and I hope you post more lovely Labyrinth stories. I am a bit greedy I know.

A most fascinating premise, well-handled.

I really love stories told out of order, mucking about in time and meeting the same person over and over at different times in their life, it's such a great story to tell! Too bad it takes way, way too much planning out. I really enjoyed this little one shot.

Omg I love it! I've yet to come across a storyline like this but I wish there were more because this is great!

Ah finally! Thank you so much for posting! Wonderful as always, nobody does the snarky little exchanges between Sarah and Jareth quite as witty as you.

I do like your stories, and this one has a very intriguing start, looking forward to see what happens next.

Brilliant! I hope you expand on this. It is unique and well written. Jareth is perfect. Congrats!

Okay...I know this is supposed to be a one shot, but I love the idea of their 'story' being out of order, with her remember him popping in and out of her life, but him not recalling it (at least initially) since in his primary timeline it hasn't happened yet :).