Love it! Very subtle, could actually be canon, not overly dome like most stories. I appreciate it. I 'd love to know what her new reality would be like. Anyway, thanks for writing this.

This is really cool, I like it! It'd be cool if you decided to continue in this verse and write about Lex living with the yautja.

Please continue . This was a awesome chapter, and a great start. I love it , I look forward to reading more

I enjoyed this. I liked the fact that you took us from where the movie left off and didn't change anything. So many stories have Scar still alive somehow, and I do like many of them, but this is refreshing. I think your writing is good. The phrase about his locks falling 'to the mercy of his shoulders' stopped me however. The words are pretty, but it didn't seem to make sense. How can shoulders be merciful. All in all, it was an enjoyable read and I'm going to see if you've written anything else. Cheers!

This is a nice start. I usually don't read Scar/Lex stories, so I'm glad Scar is dead in this story and it's not an AU where he's alive. Good job :)