| Reviews for Shinobi Hunter |
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   Lerris chapter 1 . 1/15 The first chapter was, well, bad. I just don't buy that the council would get by with that, no matter how many times I read some variation of that. Tsunade would either kill them, for violating the thirds law, or more likely say something like "If Naruto leaves, I leave. Take it or leave it." Also, Danzo wouldn't want to weaken the village by potentially starting a civil war. No, better to manipulate and control from the shadows. |
| Guest chapter 13 . 9/19/2019 Ok, HOW does Cinder know about the Uzumaki Clan, and WHY is she so afraid of them!? Does Ozpin/Oxnard know of the Uzumaki Clan!? I hope that Danzo’s role in the fall of Konoha becomes known so that he can be branded as a greater traitor to Konoha than Orochimaru! |
| SlyFox9 chapter 13 . 9/19/2019 Okay seriously you really need a beta to look over the entire story. Your spelling and use of grammar makes it unbearable to read this. I like your ideas, but the dialogues and events taking place doesn't feel all that exciting. |
| Kage-kitsune9001 chapter 9 . 9/19/2019 Speaking of "enthusiastic walks" we need an TFS Alucard cameo. |
| Kage-kitsune9001 chapter 8 . 9/19/2019 Big over protective sister Velvet is now my favorite character on this story. Chasing Ozpin better be a running gag on this fanfiction. |
| Kage-kitsune9001 chapter 5 . 9/19/2019 So he chose not to rely on the furball... |
| Luckyshot8 chapter 13 . 9/19/2019 Yo dude your back my man nice chapter |
| alen alex chapter 8 . 9/19/2019 Ohh.. my review is for chapter 8 not 7 |
| alen alex chapter 7 . 9/19/2019 Good idea, but the sympathy card gets old really fast. He a ninja for God sake can't he keep any secrets especially after being betrayed and it annoying cliche that is just stupid, what if the person he first meet in new place is a bad guy, cinder for example would he have told her everything and if you say no that being hypocritic of you, and sorry for taking this out on it just it ruins many good story because it just grain the energy out of you. |
| Gamelover41592 chapter 13 . 9/19/2019 epic work on this chapter and welcome back :) |
| Kage-kitsune9001 chapter 3 . 9/19/2019 I take back what I said previously about warming up to each other. |
| Kage-kitsune9001 chapter 2 . 9/19/2019 Can't wait to see if our favorite fox warms up to him |
| Rio Skyron chapter 13 . 9/19/2019 So a couple of issues with this chapter One, as I mentioned back when I was your Beta (sorry for not being able to btw) I mentioned that even the slowest shinobi is able to dodge a bullet. So Root Shinobi like Mizunoe should have been able to dodge an arrow especially after Cinder had just announced her presence. Also Mercury would simply say "Fuck you," and not merely "F. You" Other then that decent chapter. |
| avjuan37 chapter 12 . 8/19/2019 please make more chapters |
| jexcel chapter 9 . 7/29/2019 i tried to read this story buts its just too trashy(no offense) it feels like am reading a story about an oc called naruto which is wierd |
