Reviews for Battle Within A Battle
phishi chapter 2 . 7/2/2003
wow, good stuff! and it proves u have been active sorta recently _ nehoo, keep goin on ur stories, as soon as possible, cos it's quality writing :)

ai,

-phishi
Xenriel chapter 2 . 5/15/2003
Cool fic. Love the POV's.
f U n N i E b O n E s 2K chapter 2 . 2/18/2003
This was a truly unique story. I've never read anything quite like it before. Great thinking!
WaJB chapter 2 . 2/16/2003
wow...

This was an excellent piece of fic writing.

There have been fics on what happened between these two but this one takes the cake! Great use of musical terms; you can actually believe its what their thinking.

Great work! Please continue writing more great pieces!
Relwarc chapter 2 . 2/12/2003
Very well-written story! You did a wonderful job capturing their motives and thoughts! It's always nice to see a "canon" fic once in a while! Thank you for this enjoyable read! Are you planning on writting anything else like this?