Reviews for Naruto, the White Emperor |
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Samuel Santillan chapter 11 . 5/27 quiero el capitulo 13 14 15 de esta hisori y un harem |
Borello chapter 12 . 3/26 great work. i hoped to read more chapter. |
Guest chapter 12 . 3/5 carry this on |
Samuel Santillan chapter 12 . 9/4/2019 bueno que puedo decir pues que quiero mas de esto es muy bueno y puede mejora y quiero algo de romance |
YacknessYT chapter 12 . 7/23/2019 Will you continue it? |
Josue Cabrera chapter 12 . 7/2/2019 Arregla esta mamada lo mas logico seria que naruto estubiera en el lugar de vali osea que practicamente sea el el desendiente de los lucifer y que no tenga nada que ver con el naruto original sobre todo en apariencia y color de ropa :v pero que su proposito sea diferente al de vali obiamente por que aqui definitivamemte te jodiste todo el anime de dxd y toda la trama :v |
ericsofly2 chapter 12 . 4/10/2019 Update, update, update please |
pyoson123 chapter 1 . 4/9/2019 you wasted chapters on shit that don't matter to the story like the Aztec part and the yokai part |
Guest chapter 12 . 2/20/2019 No se si vs a leer esto peron no podes dejar tan buena historia asi como asi, es muy epica pero por supuesto, vos tenes la ultima palabra. Asi que si lees continuala please |
XLuis64 chapter 12 . 2/11/2019 I wait for the next chapter |
Rafa escamilla chapter 12 . 2/6/2019 Ya no continuaras la hiatoria? |
Michaelluciferking chapter 12 . 2/2/2019 More please |
Guest chapter 12 . 1/5/2019 Actualiza |
sadoutomaki chapter 12 . 1/2/2019 When well the next be out? Also I have an oc I’d like you to use who goes by the name of akushen di ryuvia of the holy ryuvia empire to be added as narutos second bishop his eyes are known as the sharr of ryuvia that grants the user the ability to see 5 minutes ahead in battle to know and counter their opponents every move he has blue long spiky hair down to his back, green shirt , with the red royal family of the ryuvia empire he also has a purple royal family cape with golden tethers on. His shoulders he has redish-purple eyes and a purple marking on under his left eye He has a layed back attitude and a don’t care type of attitude he loves fighting people stronger than her , though I believe his family should be a well known one by the 4 functions his crush should be Akeno and the girl who should have feelings for him or known him since childhood should be narutos rock Aine Chidorigafuchi |
XenoLucifer chapter 2 . 12/8/2018 Apologies for my hasty review on the last chapter, you trolled me good. I admit defeat. |