Reviews for Naruto, the White Emperor
Samuel Santillan chapter 11 . 5/27
quiero el capitulo 13 14 15 de esta hisori y un harem
Borello chapter 12 . 3/26
great work. i hoped to read more chapter.
Guest chapter 12 . 3/5
carry this on
Samuel Santillan chapter 12 . 9/4/2019
bueno que puedo decir pues que quiero mas de esto es muy bueno y puede mejora y quiero algo de romance
YacknessYT chapter 12 . 7/23/2019
Will you continue it?
Josue Cabrera chapter 12 . 7/2/2019
Arregla esta mamada lo mas logico seria que naruto estubiera en el lugar de vali osea que practicamente sea el el desendiente de los lucifer y que no tenga nada que ver con el naruto original sobre todo en apariencia y color de ropa :v pero que su proposito sea diferente al de vali obiamente por que aqui definitivamemte te jodiste todo el anime de dxd y toda la trama :v
ericsofly2 chapter 12 . 4/10/2019
Update, update, update please
pyoson123 chapter 1 . 4/9/2019
you wasted chapters on shit that don't matter to the story like the Aztec part and the yokai part
Guest chapter 12 . 2/20/2019
No se si vs a leer esto peron no podes dejar tan buena historia asi como asi, es muy epica pero por supuesto, vos tenes la ultima palabra. Asi que si lees continuala please
XLuis64 chapter 12 . 2/11/2019
I wait for the next chapter
Rafa escamilla chapter 12 . 2/6/2019
Ya no continuaras la hiatoria?
Michaelluciferking chapter 12 . 2/2/2019
More please
Guest chapter 12 . 1/5/2019
Actualiza
sadoutomaki chapter 12 . 1/2/2019
When well the next be out? Also I have an oc I’d like you to use who goes by the name of akushen di ryuvia of the holy ryuvia empire to be added as narutos second bishop his eyes are known as the sharr of ryuvia that grants the user the ability to see 5 minutes ahead in battle to know and counter their opponents every move he has blue long spiky hair down to his back, green shirt , with the red royal family of the ryuvia empire he also has a purple royal family cape with golden tethers on. His shoulders he has redish-purple eyes and a purple marking on under his left eye
He has a layed back attitude and a don’t care type of attitude he loves fighting people stronger than her , though I believe his family should be a well known one by the 4 functions his crush should be Akeno and the girl who should have feelings for him or known him since childhood should be narutos rock Aine Chidorigafuchi
XenoLucifer chapter 2 . 12/8/2018
Apologies for my hasty review on the last chapter, you trolled me good. I admit defeat.
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