Wow, what happens next? I really this story so I really hope it hasn't been abanded. It hasn't been updated in a year so I'm kinda gussing it has.

Please update, this is so good.

GASP! next part... where where where?

Hi
I llove your story; it's incredibly well written and I'm hooked on every word. Thank you for writing this! (ﾉヮ)ﾉ*:･ﾟ

well then... that was amazing and so well written. I am sooo curious as to how they will defeat the gray goddess. can't wait to read more

nomnomthegreat

oh my... Clark and Barbara have a death wish don't they? love the shirts Dick keeps wearing. the sayings are funny. lol love this goddess, and her lack of knowledge of the 21st century. wow, Jay is blaming this all on dick? poor kid. awww brotherly love... so sweet.
yes I'm writing a review as I'm reading.

wow, great chapter! I am glad the fanfiction app allows me to review as I read, I knew I wouldn't remember what I wanted to say since I was so tired from work.

good work! love how Bruce asks for help from Barbara. I'm gonna be caught up here soon.

what a chapter! thanks for helping me find where I left off! can't wait to see what is next...

Y las cosas empiezan a encajar.
Hola.
Me di cuenta que habías actualizado y más de uno me perdí. Este capítulo sirvió de enlace entre los problemas anteriores y los que están por venir. Confieso que lo sentí un poco... aburrido. aunque lindo en algunas partes, en especial el encuentro de la Reina amazona y Dick.
Ahora bien, lo de Pequeña Ala 'Little Wing" fue un poco al azar, aunque quizás no. Pensé que ese apodo se lo había dado Dick a Jason, aunque si fuera así fue un lindo guiño.
Saludos y buen trabajo

Uhhh lo siento. No había visto cuánto habías actualizado.
Me asusté cuando Barry empezó a desaparecer. Fue un capítulo emocionante (Por decir menos). Me hiciste sentarme en la orilla de la silla. ¡Excelente!
sin duda te luciste (¿destellaste? ¿gold?)
La historia de cómo encerraron a la Diosa fue interesante; las posibilidades se reducen y ya todos probaron cuan poderosa es. ¿Una bendición? definitivamente Dickie tiene algo.
Saludos.

Dickie never stops being adorable. It's so interesting to see how Dick can scare away the gray. He's like sunshine against her darkness which is so fitting for his character tbh. We also love a soft smiley Bruce.

I really enjoyed the whole story. The narrative is so great. I really really hope you can finish this fic. Cannot wait for the update!

Yikes, you scared me with Barry there for a second! I'm grateful that Bruce and Dickie could save him. Bruce might need him to babysit in the future when all has ended well. Or not, since Dick will be back to his old age, of course ;-)

Hal (it's Jordan, by the way, but perhaps you've already fixed that) has never been much on my radar, though the Green Lantern/Green Arrow run is one of my favourite superhero comics of all time, but obviously, I feel bad for him. And he knew he was running out of time. Creepy :-(
(I know some fanfic has Batman almost despise him, which seems a bit uncalled for. But perhaps there is some sort of canon where that has happened – honestly; you can find canon support for almost anything. I'm not counting Miller's ASBARTBW, by the way.)

And we've got the New Teen Titans too. Vic and Gar can have a great dynamic if they (survive and) get a chance to shine a bit in the future, and Raven and Starfire are powerful and good additions in the fight. Knowing your feelings about Starfire (as well as Barbara), I'm guessing she doesn't have a history with Dick, here. I'm partial to Donna, myself, though not as a romantic interest of course.

So Rhiannon has been going around murdering people to keep the secret; it had either slipped my mind, or it hasn't been explicit before. It seems Bruce shouldn't look kindly upon that, if he's got his usual no-kill rule. And I certainly would be wary of working with her – she's far too convinced she's on the right. Extremists are not to be trusted...

I'm a bit surprised that the grey goddess worked with an army of zombies and ravens when she could just have destroyed Earth by letting it turn into dust, to be honest. Perhaps she is a bit of a drama queen, after all, at least when it comes to Earth? And a good thing too, since it gave the opposition a chance to trick her ;-)
A wormhole hidden in a rock, no less – sneaky :-)
It will be interesting to see what our heroes will come up with, eventually! The Phantom Zone was a nice thought, but no cigar. Hmm. Sucking her into something seems a good idea. A black hole? Though I'm not sure if anyone knows what happens inside or if she will just get out on the other side of the Universe where she can head back again.

The Beginning of the End... Could be the beginning of the End of Everything just as well as the end of the story. First Olympus, then the Watchtower.
But I have faith ;-)

Holy moly

Such a good chapter! It was great to see what finally happened with GL, and boy was that Trojan horse moment scary! Keep up the good work!