Just wanna point out...love how nobody cares that her name is Chris in the summary, but Tyler when talking to Tiffany...I am stupid!

I was just scrolling through the Ib archive and found this. Just a couple things to point out (forgotten words, no space after a comma), but they're minor and this is very well written!
I'm now interested to see what happens to Chris...
I feel like Ib will step in somehow.

This is amazing! Please keep writing.