I love Adam and yes, this was perfect, I don't think this counts as bashing though, you faced him (or his own conscience) with his sins and the punishment he suffers from it - the loss of his sanity. You perfectly describe his inner suffering, his memories and feelings muddling into Mana's, it is hard on him but it wouldn't be an exxageration to say he did this to himself. I love how he even sports a bit of affection for Allen - probably inherited by Mana. Allen was so creepy, tbh I think he was (is coz he's stilla kid. Technically. And he's around. Somewhat.) a very creepy kid. Also, I loved how Road tried to help in even in the state she was in, I'm glad Wisely was there to comfort him though. Nice fic, thabk you for your work ()/

Amazing. I don't normally read horror, but this is the best thing I've in a long time. I love the fludity of the dream. There was just the right balance of sweet and horrifying, especially the scene where Allen grows up and turns on the Road doll and Adam.

Wow .. just wow

This is some strange and horrifying nightmare that I am not dreaming anytime soon. Really like how the Earl has human emotions inside of him and that it lashed out on him during his sleep.

Beautiful! Splendid! Amazing!