Reviews for Armored Hearts
Kerlongsj Evert Orlejov chapter 16 . 4/23/2019
Am I the only one who reviewed your fic? Weirdly but thanks for the reply. I do apologize that I took this long but it is never quiet on all fronts. As for the talk. Kazuma is biased and that is not going to change. And I am not sure if I like it. What I can say is that he is smart and he should look stuff up.

And the world of Infinite Stratos. One can wonder if our world is so different from theirs. But for once, I can applaud the stunt that Charlotte pulled as she has been put in a painful spot. With the mall, he got some brains in his skull. And it worked to a degree. But you can not solve all things with tricks.

As for Weiss, he is lucky to have Mei around. Having someone watch your back does a lot for you. It makes things complicated (how much is up to yourself) but it is good to see what he got worked out with Mei.

I do wonder how things will go next and when we will hear from you. Looks like you got busy but that's life I guess.

Please do me a favor and stick around. Lately. I got too many associates and friends falling out. Not fun.
Saluut.
Axccel chapter 16 . 4/19/2019
It’s Silver Gospel. There is no “o” at the end, that’s just Japanese accent.
Kerlongsj Evert Orlejov chapter 15 . 1/15/2019
You put on the other replies in the next chapter? You weren't joking when you said you'd update soon. About 15 chapters in and now, you finally got Ichika and Kazuma meeting up. Nothing wrong with your OC's as Weiss got one hell of a life but even so, they can find a way to start things over.

Hell of a fight, that much I can say with a twist added to it. You weren't joking when you said that updates would follow soon. Glad you know me well if I'd look at your Charlotte comment.

This was good, that much I can say. He made it out in one piece and they got some things to get over.

One thing that strikes me as odd. Weiss does not like Ichika for his civilian upbringing and the ideas that Ichika has about him. So that is the reason Weiss dislikes him. But the other girls around him safe for Ursula, are also civilians and he got a lot more patience with them. I don't really know if I like that sort of idea. For now. I will just wait and see how this will work out. I wonder what will happen next.

I'll ask again to drop by. There's a lot that I think you will like.
Saluut.
Axccel chapter 14 . 1/2/2019
Katalina is a genius! If we remove all the AC from the nations who don't go around abusing their power, then that means that only the rogue states, mercenaries, pirates, and warlords will have superweapons. If only we had thought of that sooner, we could've had world peace already! Sure, it'll be peace because everyone is equally enslaved by psychopaths, but hey, at least it's peace, right?

Or, better yet, the mercenaries go "Hey...doesn't everyone depend on us for their wars and have basically no defenses against are LARGE ARMIES OF MECHA SUPERWEAPONS? I say we go shoot them until they stop dicking with us." and they go remind the world that pissing off what basically amounts to the world's military strength is STUPID.
Kerlongsj Evert Orlejov chapter 14 . 1/2/2019
I knew that Charlotte would be involved in this, we both know how the canon story went and how things are worked out. Her father might be some ally but looks like our own Angel got her own business to work out. I wonder how that will conflict with the things you have shown here. It was a bit of a show. With the others here. Looks like Weiss and Kazuma are socialising with the other students and they all have some friends spread around the place.

And now, we got a Meusel so we have our antagonist in this fic. That much I can see here as I wonder how you will make that all work. But it looks like that person got a lot of issues in here worked out and that might not come down very well as lies upon lies upon lies is going to break you. Secrets are eaiser to work with and show here. I have experienced the same thing as well. Nice job my friend. I hope the replies come soon and I also I hope that 2019 will give a lot of chapters.
Saluut.
Siphon 117 chapter 14 . 12/31/2018
Personally, I can't wait for when the shit hits the fan, and proper ACs start crushing IS's like they deserve.

As for the chapter itself, it's fine. Glad to finally see some context for how AC's are being "replaced", but I still feel that Governments would still want to maintain and control some AC's for larger scale conflicts.

Regardless, I hope you'll give AC's a proper fight that shows how they are the strongest in Mecha warfare, in the future.

I'll admit, I'm Biased to the side of AC.

Speaking of which, are you perhaps accepting OC's. Specifically, an OC of a Pilot, and their NEXT, either as a side character in a future conflict or whatever you decide to use them for. Just figured I'd ask.
Ky0 chapter 13 . 9/27/2018
Hehe nice chap, would like to see some interactions with Lauara and Kazuma interact as well as some light with their past aside from that would like to see others perspective in the aftermath of the battle especially Ichika's perspective considering the erm 'disagreement' on Weiss' way but it's effectivity in the end in making his team's performance look utterly subpar Nya! 3
Kerlongsj Evert Orlejov chapter 13 . 9/27/2018
So this ended like this. A Pity. I would have liked it to see Ichika in this as well for a bit but hey, that's your call to make. I was interested in the parts here and the fight was a blast in how it all sorted itself out. Looks likes his skills are still being put to good use so far I can see this all.

He and Laura got some ways to look at things. This whole soldier like thing is a little bit trying and melodramatic for me but it still make things pay out in some way and it was fun for me to read this.

In unrelated regards, I knew you were written a mod but for DDLC. Like they say in Belgium, toe maar. I was a bit surprised to say the least. Haven't played that game and I'm not going to. Do drop by sometime.
Saluut.
ZenPyros chapter 13 . 9/27/2018
I think you made a typo, before the start or the match Reinhardt and Nomida's designations were Booker 1 and Booker 2 but as soon as the match starts that designation changes to Baker 1 and Baker 2. This was kind of confusing to read but also easy to understand error.
Guest chapter 12 . 9/7/2018
Bodewig ships noblecore x white knight
Grinja chapter 12 . 8/1/2018
I was kinda confused at Laura's actions this chapter. He was just doing amazing in a fight she participated in, but sees him smile and loses her shit? Well that won't do. When he's healed, Kazuma will just have to show her whats up. That said, I hope she ends up in the Weiss camp instead of Ichika's.
Ky0 chapter 12 . 8/1/2018
I wonder who would be an influence to Bodewig, or who would she gravitate more, granted her being with Ichika but more associating with Weiss...

Makes me wonder if she for the naive IS boy or the AC soldier? :3
Kerlongsj Evert Orlejov chapter 12 . 7/31/2018
It hasn't been that long since I heard from you, although I'm going to ask you again to drop by. It was fun to see this chapter. I can see that you had fun writing this chapter. You did one wonderous job on writing a military guy back to the normal life. If he ever had that. He and Laura can indeed compare but I can get where she is getting angry from. She wants to keep the idea of her perfect soldier in her head and she won't let anyone destroy it.

In her wrapped mind, the girls that had been hanging around Weiss makes her change that idea. But we'll see how this works out. If she would do anything to hurt those girls around him, I don't wanna be around him when that happens.
Saluut.
Siphon 117 chapter 12 . 7/30/2018
I still find it strange that proper military organizations wouldn't still keep AC's as a back up, given that a properly piloted AC can stomp an IS one on one no problem, but I digress.

Overall a good chapter, and can't wait for more.
epikphael chapter 11 . 6/30/2018
I took about a full days worth of nonstop reading to finish all the chapters... I think? Maybe less than that? Well it sure as hell is enough proof for me that I had a damn good read. Cant wait for the next chapter.

Yeah there were a few (like about 5) typos and missing words in per chapter, but feels minor since you got a solid mood and setting here, People that feels and think like people rather than chess pieces that talk and have a face that a startlingly large amount of "lesser grade" fanfictions seem to portray. The characters here don't just do this or do that. They also express their intentions through their thought processes and emotions that's visible or prompted. I don't get enough of this kind of novel like experience...

Well onto plot related inputs, I am intrigued by Dunoa Corporation's plan to integrate AC tech with those of the IS. If the IS core gets implanted into an AC frame, will they be able to evolve? It makes me think of "Black Glint".

I wonder if there will be an Arms Fort situation in the future. That would be a fun mess for sure.
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