Reviews for Perfect Timing
Phoenix Artemis Halliwell chapter 1 . 3/4/2019
elastic? u mean hair-tie?
Marlab chapter 5 . 8/25/2017
I loved the insights into Wyatt and a little whump didn't hurt! Nicely done!
IWillNeverStopFangirling chapter 5 . 4/1/2017
Really enjoyed this!
Great job! :D
Dominique Icefall chapter 1 . 2/23/2017
From WA, the Review Game! I'm reading cannon blind. The opening is amazing because it provides the reader with both the situation and the characters current situation. The dialogue is nicely done, helping the reader get to know the Characters as well as helping the story move forward. I love the romance factor, subtle without being forced. (I love romance though so I may be biased). The way the Point of views change are smooth, and really nicely done. I feel like I can understand the characters better because of the changes in the P.O.V. and it's not sudden or unexpected, so it helps add to the story as a whole. The car crash scene was Epic! I could almost see the crash as I was reading it. Following the car crash was a the ending of the chapter and I really want to continue reading. This is an amazingly well done fanfic., besides a few Grammar confusions at the beginning it was a wonderful first chapter and I enjoyed reading it.
parisindy chapter 1 . 2/1/2017
Love this story!
Guest chapter 5 . 2/1/2017
well done. Characters and conversations were spot on! Thanks for taking the time to write this and keep up the good work!
usa123 chapter 5 . 1/27/2017
Great ending! Thanks for sharing!
Sparky Dorian chapter 5 . 1/21/2017
This was really nice! The characterizations were spot on and the story was enjoyable. I thought you did a really good job with replicating each of their manners of speaking. I also liked the reasoning about Agent Christopher's choice for Wyatt in the beginning. Very well done! :)
xorah chapter 5 . 1/21/2017
i loved it, it was so sweet and their emotions were well written, great work!
Undertheoaktrees chapter 5 . 1/21/2017
Thank you for this story. Enjoyed it and hope you have more ideas for Timeless.
Di92 chapter 5 . 1/20/2017
I love the ending. Though I did crave more action some things are better off simple. I really love the interaction and relationship every character holds with each other. The closeness between Lucy and Wyatt is just as expected since they still don't seem to find where they stand in each other's lives after the unexpected kiss. The way they discretely and unknowingly show affection is absolutely adorable.
Thank you for the wonderful storyline. I hope to see a new one soon.
wotumba1 chapter 5 . 1/20/2017
They need to go out together, they are a team and will only really work as such. ..

Great story, thanks for sharing!
kln8525 chapter 5 . 1/20/2017
It's a very good story, I'm sad to see the end. Can't wait to see what you come up with next.
Guest chapter 4 . 1/19/2017
I love this quote. "Smart is knowing a tomato is a fruit," replied Rufus. "Intelligence is knowing not to put it in a fruit salad.". Great story! Get Wyatt well and back protecting his team!
Liz chapter 4 . 1/19/2017
Wow, this just keeps getting better with each chapter! I should have known the mission couldn't be that easy for Lucy and Rufus. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
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