I loved it! It was very engaging, and kept me wanting more, from the excitement. I really loved everything about it, the one thing that I would say is that it was hard to keep track of the days and nights sometimes But I wasn’t bother by it

Good job on the story you made

oh wow! really enjoyed reading this. thank you for ana amazing story

Good job I liked it.

I know this is over but I wanted to let you know I really enjoyed it :3

PLEASE DO ANOTHER SOON

I'm begging you hear me out one of the nights could you please have Yuki or Kyo kiss Tohru head IM LITERALLY BEGGING YOU PLEASE and the review part of this is that it was very good however you need to put in when you change scenes I got a bit confused when Hatori ( I think ) was talking to Akito.
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Because I'm soooo nice *lol* I will review it and I conclusion ... its FABUOLUS just fabulous :)

omg this is AMAZING I'm soooooo jello lolz your truly are an amazing writer no joke ;)

First of all you forgot the DUN DUN DUUUUUUUNNNNNN lol but for your first time that was brilliant 3 I wish I could write like that

Yay!

can not wait till next chapter/sequel comes out!

I like the direction this is headed. Excited to read more.

Hi, I remembered that episode (I think it was the new year's when the Sohma family need to gather at the main house for a celebration) And I remembered Tohru wasn't invited. - But then Yuki and Kyo ran back to Shigure's house so that they don't leave Tohru alone. (I don't remember if there was a robbery near by... But with the robbery... it's a nice change)

cant wait for the next part of the story