I hope you update soon

The FMA touches are interesting, though I hope Toffee is not Envy or something like that. Would love to see more of your lore play out, where these 'visions' are heading, and why Marco has not told Star about her dying presumably.

I look forward to the next chapter.

I look forward to the next chapter.

Just binged this... Its good overall, although it's a bit predictable here and there. This chapter was the best overall, due to grammar, spelling and the lack of a self-inserted comment. Keep doing that, and you're golden. ;)
MRAY 4TW

Haven't read a chapter of this story for awhile now, but from what I'm seeing in this chapter, things are going to start getting really exciting soon. Can't wait

I look forward to the next chapter.

Although there are some issues I have to give credit where it's due. Having Marco basically doing the kamehameha pose was great. I'm surprised no one else has really done anything like this. The creator of the show pretty much came out and said there was a relation between marco and dragon ball z. Aside from that the whole monster fight seemed forced tension I mean a random group of monsters randomly show up in a place that is supposed to be unknown? Also I have trouble believing a minotaur would be as unaffected by star's magic as it was.

I look forward to the next chapter.

I want my Starco

I want to trap Jackie in a basement then starve her after use her as a sex slave starting a business where I would trade jacked to groups and then shoot her and call her a slut

Please deviate from canon.

Good chapter. Glad to see it picked back up. Can't wait for more

hey there, have you seen the season 2 finale ? and when will the next chapter be up ?

Dude that was awesome I hope you come up with another chapter soon! I was missing out on you. But now that I read your story, I want to read more of it then ever! Please keep up the great work!