Reviews for The Road Less Traveled
BiGDeal chapter 1 . 2/20
An interesting vignette, but one probably without a sequel or continuation. SIGH
Shadowstorm-Vash chapter 1 . 9/17/2019
Good premise, I wished you continued it
Hikari Nova chapter 1 . 1/10/2019
revive and update this please it's very interesting
Merlenyn chapter 1 . 10/9/2018
I like this story so far and I hope to see more soon. lol I'm looking forward to seeing Ranma work on his femininity, as well as unlocking any more secrets of that broach...
ZigsL chapter 1 . 2/24/2018
I hope this isn’t dead
TimberlineWolf chapter 1 . 9/19/2017
okay, so I'm reading the de la Vega scene, and now I reeally want a REAL de la Vega to show, looks and acts exactly the same as Ranma's act, contract in hand, while they're out at the beach.

T'would be hilAIRious!
(yes i spelled it wrong on purpose)
Bigou chapter 1 . 8/1/2017
A good first chapter, I hope to read more of it.
silverhawk88 chapter 1 . 7/31/2017
Wow, this was a great start. I was laughing throughout the whole first chapter with Ranma not being recognized by the sisters, then the prank pulled by Ranma on the panda and soun! Genius!

I hope to see more soon. I really like this story.
Porpoisepower chapter 1 . 7/10/2017
A couple small typos(missing words), but an otherwise excellent start, I look forward to more. Your prose is easy to read(clear transitions and I'm not constantly guessing who's talking, etc) and engages the reader.
CryptIXeeper chapter 1 . 5/19/2017
While I love the story and concept, you need a Beta-Reader because I can tell English isn't your first language.

There is a fair amount of tense mistakes, along with overly large paragraphs that could be broken up.

I Beta for some others, so I don't have a problem doing this for you. Just give me a PM and we can go from there.
Rorac The Dragon Knight chapter 1 . 4/8/2017
very well done. please update it's not often I see a story this well done and would hate to see it die.
hagancameron chapter 1 . 2/14/2017
you hot me hooked, keep it comminh
James Birdsong chapter 1 . 1/21/2017
Great
Hirrayami Otoni chapter 1 . 1/20/2017
You know, this story reminds me of an old one i read a long time ago (early 2000s). It was not a crossover, it was a pure Ranma flick but it had more or less the concept idea; I do not remember it's title though.

trying to get Ranma to accept his female side and be more feminine. But the one who issued the challenge was not Kasumi in there but Nodoka her self. And they went to a resort to do that challenge, with the Tendo sisters.

In and all your concept varies and it is interesting. Would like to see more of this.
nashmeira chapter 1 . 1/18/2017
I definitely hope you contenue the story it's really interesting and fun so far. Though I felt a little like I was missing a few key descriptions when the girls came home to find Ranma transformed into a sailor scout attire and practiceing in the dojo. Seems a little sudden I guess, kind of expected a build up more to that. Like wise what the weapon was she was using, I was unsure if that was meant to be like the silence glave or not.

It's a really great start I hope you update soon and I really look forward to the next chapter. :3
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