Nice story.

Happy August!

Technically wouldn't Galactus be Marvel's God of destruction?

Dam that is one insane battle but it was awesome. Good luck to hope

Naruto has a point for scarlet witch

Good job on the start

Oh shit that is not for the shonen five

Grammar wise, extreamly well done.

Story wise, a bit less.

My only complaints about this is the sheer lack of charactet focus. This arc should of had much more time devoted to single characters and why they matter. Gotenks didn't even get a single sentence when you first showed him off.

The only four that get a lot of dialoge are Goku, Naruto, Spider-Man and Hope. With everyone else standing and doing relatively nothing of cobsequence. And relationships are really lacking.

The only 'relationships' in this are the student teacher vibes of Hope with Goku and Spider-Man.

In Wakanda, why did Naruto care so much for Storms supposed death? He didn't know anything about her, and neither one even had a decent conversation. Sure, she died and Naruto hates when soneone dies. But you made seem like it was personal. Why was it personal?

The only problems are the lack of focus on lesser characters, and that you have them act like they already have established relationships when really, they don't. Skippikng ahead 60 days to get to the beginning was a bad idea, as we ddon't see tgem develop as a team.

Is Naruto the leader? Is Goku? What role does everyone play in the Alliance? How did them come to develop as a team? Did they but heads at first? Those last few are question we won't be able to learn now.

Sorry if this seems like hate, but character interactions and development are important, and could make or break a story. This just seems like the Alliance comes in, hijakes everything and makes it better for very little reason other than 'Their involved.'

Overall, still a decent story that should really improve their characters.

That. Was. Epic! Great end to A vs. X. Can't wait for the net arc.

Later

I love the ending of Hope in here, hopefully she only helps out the Shonen Alliances when they need her. So is the by any chance the Hulk/Bruce Banners is offered a position and when is the other future members going to join.

That was awesome that hope vs dark Phoenix way better than comic ending great job man can't wait for what is next.

ITS BACK IN ACTION AND IT BEEN FIVE MONTHS SINCE I SAW IT...sorry about that, got excited