This was a great story, you have a very good way to characterize everyone.

i really loved this! it was so good and im not really good at reviewing but just keep doing what you’re doing because it was wonderful. i finished this in a day and im so glad that there’s a sequel! your writing is so good and the story and characters were beautiful! i can really relate to scorpius because of his aspergers and he was so cute and i love the relationship between the main three kids. i also like how you go into the problems with albus and his family and how he doesn’t fit in and just everything i really loved and i hope you had a good day!

My son has pervasive developmental disorder which is similar to aspergers. Thanks for including something like that in your story.

I love the story and as for the aspergers and speaking from personal experience you did it perfectly and it's always hard to write about it but be careful you don't slip into autism by accident as it's pretty easy to do so. also I felt connected to scorpius as I myself have aspergers bordering autism. and if you need anything from a first person view don't hesitate to ask

This is pretty sweet and I know from how my brother is that Aspurgers isn't a hinderance if you don't want it to be. He has it and he is working to save up for flight school and will become a pilot one day.

Nice work and don't worry about updating, just take your time. Life come first. :)

Nice. Love the discussion between Scorpious and Rose there.

Hey ! Thanks for the story, I like it. Hope you'll continue this
best wishes

Great job and I love this story

Well, Quidditch, of course! Albus is a Weasley-Potter, he gets it from both sides. :-)

If Albus could connect to his family, just a bit, through enjoying watching a match with them...

So if you *act* like a Slytherin (not in the evil-Slytherin way, just in the "loyal to your house first" way), people notice. If there was something Albus was good at, that he could help his fellow Slytherin firsties with...

Looking forward to your next!

Yay! Love this fic. I'm excited for eventual ScorBus (thank you, tumblr!). Hope you update soon (ish)!

Interesting chapter and I like that Kreacher is treating Albus okay.

Pretty good chapter! Poor Albus...the conversation was a disaster kkk

I thought you wrote Kreacher superbly.

Quite something to see, Kreacher trying to reach out to Albus, to help him... re-attach with Albus' own family. I get the feeling that Albus is getting worse, not better, what's going on?

The conversation with Rose went about as well as would be expected- disaster. Perhaps Albus and Scorpio can find some nice Hufflepuff to interpret human society for them...

I love this story!