| Reviews for Runaway |
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Portside Crowds chapter 22 . 6/23 oh my god, I just can’t start to describe how this chapter was beautifully made... I can’t, either it’s my inadequacy, or words simply couldn’t articulate how beautiful this chapter was. damn, I could feel the hurt the love the depth and ughh, I just simply love it. |
Portside Crowds chapter 20 . 6/23 I was worried Sakura would do something to Sasuke when Hinata passes ... but somehow I was glad that wasn’t the case.. although it wasn’t pretty either XD |
HinataOverAnyHoe chapter 30 . 6/15 I've teared up, smiled, laughed and cried with this incredible story I read over a span of two days. I'd sing your praises but I'd prolly never get done so I'mma just cut it sweet and short. You're an incredible writer Ink-Child-Senpai, and urghh this was honestly spot on! I loved everything about it, a wonderful read fr. Thank you for writing and sharing, and all your contributions to the wonderful Sasuhina fandom. You rock! Hope you're doing well and keeping safe! Thanks a bunch for all your wonderful work. Take care :) |
scirleah21 chapter 12 . 4/19 Chapter 12, I cried so hard on Naruto's letter, oh my gahddd... So beautiful author-san... |
Guest chapter 30 . 2/3 Wow amazing just amazing your writing is really good.. those letter naruto wrote to sasuke some of them were so deep and emotional I cried |
Ka-han-say chapter 15 . 1/29 Hey so just so you know using peroxide kills all bacteria. Good and bad. Using peroxide is frowned upon for first aid if soap and water is available. |
palmtreehead chapter 25 . 1/3 Naruto’s final letter was a great way to end this story, so very bittersweet. Thanks for sharing |
xLifescape0709x chapter 30 . 1/1 I have never read a fanfiction that has made me cry this much. I tell you, the emotion was thoroughly transferred. I was sobbing at five in the morning without batting an eyelash because I could not stop reading this shit. Although there were some things I didn’t like, like Hinata’s attitude towards the boys and her obliviousness towards the consequences of her actions (because to be honest she seemed like a Mary Sue to me most of the time), it was easily forgettable due to Sasuke’s situation and Naruto’s death. I have never liked Naruto as much as I did in this fic, you made me love him so much I actually burst into tears at work remembering the parts where Hinata would think “You can do it, Hinata-chan”. You emboldened the purity of his character through his letters, it was truly inspiring. So, out of everything, I did not like Hinata, Sasuke was okay, and you already know my opinion on Naruto. But the thing I think needs to be overtly exposed with your story is your capacity of conveying such a variety of deep, complicated feelings through the simplicity of a screen. That is a feat that even renowned writers can’t yet accomplish. I congratulate you. |
palmtreehead chapter 2 . 12/28/2019 I love NaruHina and this has already made me cry a bit cos I have 3 very young children and know I couldn’t bear losing their daddy either. Also adore that his children believe he likes to warm people up, and that’s what makes Hinata resolve to be kind to Sasuke. Thanks for sharing |
Helly chapter 30 . 11/20/2019 Just... WOW! I know that it's been a long time that you wrote this story but I wanted to Thank you for writing this beautiful novel. I honestly, truly, completely FELL IN LOVE with "Runaway". I don't have the word to tell you how much your story impact me. The anguish, the grief, the guilt, the beginning of the love story and especially all the happy moments. I love it so MUCH. A lot of stories focus on the angst or drama but don't give us enough fluff... So often a the end, I remain a little unsatisfied. But it was not the case here, definitely not. You was very generous to write a lot fluff. And for that I'm very grateful. I was so invested and attached to the characters that I needed some happy moments. I think it's important to also see them happy and content in their life. So thank you again. You describe the feeling of each characters so so well.. And the way you used the parallels of their background in the naruto universe. It's very ingenious! Moreover, I love how you write children. They are so cute and endearing but mostly they seem real. Even in Swith-a-roo the way you write children is so lovely. I never loved children in stories as much as in your stories Runaway was the first modern AU with the naruto's characters that I read. And since this one I binge reading a lot of AU modern stories. Since, I've understand that there are so much hidden talents who write fanfictions. And it's truly a shame that you don't have the recognition you deserve... Do you ever think to publish your stories ? You know, I have recently read "One day in December" which is an international bestseller. It was even praise by Reese Witherspoon. It was a good novel. I enjoyed reading it. But it's NOTHING compare to yours! Really. The emotions are not written as deep as yours and the development of the story is simple. Whereas in Runaways, there are not only the development of the love story but we understood the characters's background thank of the flashbacks or Naruto's letters. And most of all I love that you can develop the story but also add theirs inners feeling in italics. It's was Perfect. If I tell you all of this is really to encourage you to publish this one if you can. I truly believe that you can easily become a bestseller. You truly have a gift and I'm feel grateful to be a part of your readers. I hope you will continue a long time to share your writing talent with us. And if one day you decide to publish one of your works. Tell us and I will definitely be of your early buyer :) PS : Sorry in advance if there are grammatical errors, I'm not native English |
Akaswag chapter 15 . 6/28/2019 man i'am confuse, shouldn't Haku and Sora at least 2 years different? because Hinata pregnant with Sora when Haku like 13month right? plus more or less 9 month pregnancy. if they only one year one month apart than i'am doing math wrong. |
Guest chapter 25 . 2/22/2019 Naruto's last letter to Sasuke is beautiful. He is such a faithful and true friend to Sasuke. For some reason, thinking Naruto writing at the end, 'we'll meet again' would have been better since he passed away, instead of 'i'll see you soon'. Course, Naruto wouldn't know he was going to die but would have shown, death isn't the end. Love lives on. |
Guest chapter 23 . 2/22/2019 This chapter is so beautiful. I'm glad Hinata was able to read Sasuke's letter to Naruto |
kaedeakira0711yahoo.com chapter 30 . 2/16/2019 hi! i have read this multiple time whenever i crave for a sasuhina treat.. the characters are absolutely delightful to read.. the angst the grieving the falling in love again and basically all the aspect of it... i was wondering if u can write something about the twins how they are different with each other or how sasuke as a father to them... to sum it up can u write another chapter again? i miss this family they are the cutest... thank u for writing and i hope u update your other stories...i love them too... |
OnlyIntuition chapter 30 . 2/8/2019 If I haven't said this enough already, thank you SO MUCH for sharing this beautiful story. It moved between sorrow and heart breaking joy and I loved every bit of it, truly truly. I'm so thankful for the happy ending (or beginning for the new family?) And for the adorable one shots and snapshots into their lives :) |