This was so elegantly written. I love the concept of parallel universes and I think you pulled this off well. It really pulled at my heart but in a good way. I love how you wrote the characters too. Such a great piece!

Ah this is so good! I liked how you shifted the pov of the story and ESPECIALLY the line about the diner at the end. I knew it was coming but it still killed me a little bit. I also really liked Mokuba's three paragraphs at the beginning.

Awww... This was heartwarming and sad all at once. i love how you tied in Mokuba's vision with the ending, and Roland's wish to have adopted the Kaiba brothers warms my heart :)