| Reviews for What I do as a Gamer! |
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  Rando Critique chapter 2 . 8/19 Could be much, much better with proper grammar, such as adding ‘ed’ or “‘s” when necessary, as well as moving a few words around (Not that I’m one to talk about bad grammar), and while I like an absolutely OP OC just as much as the next guy doesn’t mean I don’t like having them have a occasional reality check or challenge while they are on the path to OPness |
 General13812825 chapter 1 . 7/25 Nice try making this story, but really? All i saw is some kid playing ninja with godlike powers. Sigh should have put some dark wolf shiro spice on it and some Dark Lucifer morningstar. Making the Mc feel like a "real character" with flaws and setbacks. If it were me i would have put some dark eldric lovecraftian god and just destroy everything that he has for some reality check Well good luck on improving. |
| Madara's Lost Soul chapter 1 . 7/13 Shunshin |
| frankiebayer2002 chapter 2 . 6/4 Plz write more |
| frankiebayer2002 chapter 2 . 6/4 Plz write more |
| magelord2007 chapter 14 . 5/22 I love it |
| Violet Chloe Snow chapter 1 . 5/15 Man. Poor Naruto. Even with his parents alive, he still gets screwed. |
| Naelyon chapter 1 . 2/21 This is trash, I absolutely love ridiculously overpowered MC's that did nothing to earn their power other than having the absolutely reality breaking power called 'The Gamer', but with your hogyokou it's just too much, and the health has sacrificed was just his HP not even his max HP. |
| SteadfastWhiplash chapter 1 . 2/14 Dude fixes a wheel and is given a sons greatest momento to his father... WTF? |
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/27 This is apparently a rewrite (first chapter not this one) but goddamn does the English and grammar suck! |
| shaysa123 chapter 1 . 1/8 stroke AND cancer... WOW |
| Atryx10 chapter 1 . 11/27/2019 He should've gotten himself Aura from RWBY and Haki from One Piece in that one year time period, just to be safe. |
| LincolnRonnie94 chapter 6 . 10/26/2019 Nice one thanks to Izuma soulstern he have taken Alexander as his minion and he’s using him not only to sabotage Orochimaru Invasion by pretending to be on his side but also be his Double Agent or at least that’s my guess |
| Harrison Aldrich Emrys chapter 1 . 8/18/2019 Maybe with Izuma there, Naruto will be smarter and less prone to jumping in without a plan. |
| Shortmike24 chapter 2 . 6/20/2019 this is stupid. you has him at level 100 then have some dumb cunt knocks him out... make up your mind. is he OP or not? |
