Great story.

Hello,

This was a really cute and at the same time very steamy one-off and it was very well written if I do say so myself. I might be a little biased because I ship Booker/Elizabeth, but I think you captured their character mannerisms exceedingly well and portrayed the relationship in a very realistic way. Overall I loved it!

Keep up the great work!

Respectfully,
TheLifeLongEditor

Oh man I love elizabeth, she is so fucking cute :3 and to think her first crush was her dad, the creators wanted to troll us really bad but the joke is on them because its still one super cute couple, and besides after reading so much fanfiction incest stops being a big deal when it comes to a story :v

Goodness the ending sure did warmed the heart.

Damn good work sir. Here's hoping there is more to come

This was an enjoyable read. Do you have plans to write a follow up or is this purely a stand a lone fic?