Hiya, how are you?
So, my brain is still processing this chapter. I mean, totally mind blown.
Buuut, let's start!

In the Austin chapter you hinted that the mysterious character who followed Aj was someone who knew her. But the father?! Did the two entities have proposed something to spouses Bradshaw? What kind of deal did they make?
And what about Morgan? Crazy. Now there are new questions: why drones helped him? What did MECH promise him to be able to collaborate with them? What does he get from it? If he said that this Aj is his "favorite version", does that mean he met Dr. Bradshaw too? And the technology that activates the twins' gladiator mode?
(Yes I know i'm thinking too much, but how can I don't it with your stories?)

I already foresee that the next chapter will be the bomb of bombs, and not just for the explanations SOMEONE owes to his daughters, but for Aj and Aubrey's feelings. He left them for years and put Sunstreaker and Sideswipe in danger! I hope someone punches him, and not just physical.

I cant' wait to read the next chapter! Stay safe!
Baci e abbracci!

HOOOOLLLLYYYY SHIIIIIIIITT!

THANK YOUU! Ill say it for everyone, we love you so much. Good on you for not quitting. I gotta say, the scene where she just fucking shot her whole body through that grimlock drone was incredibly badass. Also Sideswipe confessing? I havent fangirled this bad in a long time! Ah and their dad? time for daddy issues which us gonna be so much fuuunnnn. Anyway you better not make us wait that long again, although as a writer i know how hard it can be to write. if you don't plan to continue this after a few more chapters, would you mind PMing me how it ends cuz ive been on this ride too long and it would kill me if this story just swam around in my head unfinished. Also, ive been reading your other story BLACK and i gotta say kinda falling in love with that one too.
Anyway, as i always say,

Keep Writing Keep Reading Nova out

What. What. WHAT. I did not see that coming. You’re amazing.

Also, Sideswipe told Aj he loved her! I was rushing my way through the chapter before church and it was ALL I could think about thanks a lot.

AMAZING CHAPTER ONE OF MY FAVOURITES. I literally cannot wait for the next one!

H.O.L.Y. S.H.I. T... That is all I can say to this chapter's events. First of all, I feel like my chest was punched with an iron pipe. First off, I love Aj and her sister's debates, they made me laugh aloud... I totally was not expecting to see Morgan again either, I can't believe he's alive. And the part with Sideswipe... Oh my gosh, that was utterly heart wrenching to read. Twins are tied and his reaction to not feeling his brother's bond was beautifully written and explained... Also! Aj's instantaneous reaction to dealing with him was so beautiful and adorable to witness, plus she actually got through to him during his gladiator mode... Finally! I CAN'T BELIEVE THEIR FATHER IS ALIVE AND PRESENT!

wait WHAT
WHAT THE FUCK?!
W H A T?!
Damn, you've outdone yourself this time
I'm speechless

Ohhhh snap.

First of all, how dare you. Second of all, HOW DARE YOU!

You have the nerve to drop ALL OF THAT on us at the same time and then you just leave us hanging with those cliffhangers?! Woman I swear you better not take too long updating or I will personally haunt your tumblr until I get my love confession reaction scene because hot DAMN am I hungry for more twins feels 3 seriously, I will haunt you.

Oh my god.
What? WHAT?
OH MY GOD!
This was most definitely not expected, also I loved the "It was always you, I love you" that was adorable. Hi the is the best ever!

did not see that coming, great chapter

Big OOF energy here.

OH MY GOD I FUCKIN CALLED IT! YES! FUCK YEAH! I knew there was gonna be a fuckim character reveal this chapter but this STILL somehow caught me off guard! Though, her mom being a 'defender' with her dad seeming completely uninvolved but reacting the way he did never sat right with me. This chapter was glorious and I CANNOT WAIT FOR THIS FUCKER'S EXCUSE FOR HIS BULLSHIT. The whole chapter would honestly be one of my all time favorites even without the reveal! I mean, the whole ass Vegas battle, the confrontation with Morgan, & Aj vs Gladiator Mode? Golden. You're legit my favorite author!

sidenote: Ratchet would totally destroy him if AJ asked. Maybe he'll do it anyways, who knows.

What. The. Actual. Fuck. I'm losing my shit right now, I'm losing all my shit! First you have Sides saying THAT, and then their dad, and then you end it! WHAT! I'm dying. I'm dead. You've killed me. The emotional whiplash was too much. Rip me. Ffs, I went from being all hyped bc of all the 'they won't hurt me' and then Sides being all like 'I love you' and now I'm just dead.
I'm basically physically restraining myself from using the caps lock tbh. Feel free to imagine me running around my room with my hands in my hair, yelling all of that and then flubbering around attempting to find words because, and I shit you not, my brain just straight up shut down for a good couple seconds after reading this. Like... when you said you were waiting for this chapter I has this thought of, oooh what if its some twin romance hint cuz now she's thinking about it? AND THEN THIS! WOMAN! WHY?!
Damn... in all seriousness, just... damn. I legit can't fucking wait for the next chapter, holy shit.

Just read small fry and all of this in 2 days. This is an awesome story. Though, I'm not a huge fan of Cade Yeager, honestly. Besides, from what I remember there was a poll on who should she be with, and Sunstreaker and Sideswipe got the most votes. What happened to that? Nevertheless, I'll continue reading the story. Please update soon. :)

I’m just saying this with all the love possible, but you better fucking finish this story. You can’t slow burn a story and not end the story I mean we’ve been WAITING. I love your work though and your other story BLACK, don’t stop writing Kay.
Keep Writing Keep Reading, Nova out ;)