Excellent chapter! Sad to see Harry and Daphne apart. Glad to see that Sirius has been exonerated. Hopefully Peter won't escape the justice he so richly deserves. Great job!

Cool chapter! Glad to see Harry meeting Eldric. Also glad to see that Arthur is working to get his older sister back into the family. Wondering what's going on with Daphne - doesn't look like she's so sure herself... Hopefully things will be as Celestina predicted. Great job!

Excellent chapter! Enjoyed all of the action. I can see that Harry's dementor has been dialed down a few notches here... Glad to see Celestine and Lunafreya joining the fray! Can't wait to see what's next!

Excellent chapter! Too bad Harry hasn't learned the Patronus charm, yet, or has he? Glad to see they've caught Peter, but will they keep him?

Excellent chapter! Love all of Arthur's introspections. Also glad he got Buckbeak away from the idiots. I just hope they don't discover the Hippogriff by the Whomping Willow...

Excellent chapter! Looking forward to seeing what you do with this. I like how Arthur and Remus are moving through this story and causing things to happen. Arthur is quite the interesting character. Almost like a James Potter without the Lily, or perhaps the Lily is one of his sisters or mother? I am actually shocked he hasn't challenged Fudge to a duel or is that not part of this particular universe? Great job!

Now that was an interesting twist on the canon. Great job! Very well written. I thought it was quite in-character for Fudge to want to obliviate Harry. Glad to see McGonagall and Rosemerta watching out for Harry. And then there is Dumbledore... "I have no reason to lie to you." Of course, he has no reason to tell Harry the truth, either. Interesting that Harry didn't grill Dumbledore on his lordship...

Glad to see Arthur and the twins watching out for Harry. Also glad to see Harry and Hermione being friends again. About time... No Daphne, though? :-( Excellent chapter!

Excellent chapter! Loved seeing Daphne put Draco in his place. Good girl that one! Also enjoyed seeing Remus and Arthur head out into the forest for some stress relief. Harry and Daphne having opposite reactions to the kiss was just too funny, too. Great job!

That ending was too funny! Good on Daphne! One little nit to pick - how did they get from the Black Lake to the Slytherin Common Room with nothing in between? Or was it just because Harry was so dazed from Daphne's kiss that he didn't notice walking back from the lake, into the castle and accompanying Daphne at least part way to the Slytherin Common Room? I could actually believe that... Great chapter!

Excellent chapter! Love how Harry found out about his lordship and family duties from Arthur. Very well done that! I'm also enjoying how Harry and Daphne banter with each other. It's a more unique way of bringing them together. Great job!

where's it at? I cannot find it

What? "Poor Harry had his parents taken from him at the tender age of four." Where in the world did that come from? Harry was only fifteen months old when his parents were killed. That's one year old, not four. If you intentionally changed it, you really should have told us about it long before now. Major changes like that should be introduced and explained as soon as possible.

You do realize that adult wizards can use magic, right? And there's a charm in Harry Potter called "impervious" which repels rain and mist. Why is your main character acting like a non-magical person?

There's no such thing as a coo-coo clock. The word is "cuckoo".