*stares at the words "Fongoid" and "Time Paradoxes"* Did you just make a Ratchet and Clank reference?! 0_0 I don't know if it was a reference to my favorite video game series (much less my favorite game in the series), but I'm counting it. Give me a second, I have to geek out...

This story is great! It's well-written and I can't stop imaging Bill in his really loud and obnoxiously yellow sweater. Unfortunately, I didn't get any of the other references, but it was kind of funny to see Bill use different universes and dimensions to express his feelings. Also, the relationship between Bill and Mabel was adorable and fun to read. Great job on the story, and I can't wait for more! :)

(I'll read the second part a little later from now)

This was cute. I'm gonna go read the second now.
("obnoxiously yellow" pretty much sums up Bill)