Well shit this fanfic was actually a good one, good fortune to you author.

Bummer this was good

What do you have against naruto? Him having adhd is not cannon. If he did, he could not have mastered chakra control as he did- which you need to become a sage.
When naruto and sasuke he equal opportunity to learn, they both learnt tree walking at the same time. Sasuke learnt faster, while naruto could keep concentrating and learning for longer periods of time.

You are thinking too linearly-like our history. We don’t know how chakra modified the pace of science . All those wars using chakra could also have destroyed all tech.
Another point to consider is that Kaguya came from a different planet- even if naruto world at that time was in the Iron Age, Kaguya and the sage might have known of and used iron man level tech.

He lost control 3 times. All against people who would have destroyed konoha if he had not lost control.
It’s stupid of them to assume that the seal would not hold just because you as the author has seen naruto loose control 4 times and heard about him doing so a few times.
Also, remember, he started loosing control not because he could not control it, but because he was being taught to use it by jiraiya who used his key to loosen the seal.

They should have done their research in the new world, and Shirō’s character would never allow him to even think about killing off a child. Even an adult who has not yet lost control. Analysing the seal would have told them how strong the seal was. They would not have gone straight to killing him, but to learn how to tighten and repair the seal.

Emiya Shirou’s first thought would always be to ensure that naruto never looses control- and second would be to persuade him from becoming a ninja and third would be to e sure that naruto is strong enough on his own to not need the demon.

what the fuck, this has absolutely no flaws whatsoever
it's a complex masterpiece, their characters are even better than their anime counterparts and the story and original ideas makes it interesting and exciting to read, it's because of braindead morons like the commentor below me that this wasn't able to be finished, I dont know why you expect him the author to come up with exciting battle scenes right off the bat or plot from the original story to make it sound good because you have the iq and attention span of a seventh grader

go fuck yourself

its a good story with some flaws. But overall the flaws are minimal to the good story it weaves.

there an adoption of this thing called the seventh path.
just letting you know

this fic have been adopted by Tan Zong Wei on space battle ( threads/the-seventh-path-fate-stay-night-x-naruto.848077/) with a small twist: sakura reincarnated as a Nara to complete the classic 3-men genin team. One chapter for now. Let's hope for the best!

So his new family died being crushed by Kyuubi and Shirou's best response is 'that's too bad, they seem like good people.' Wouldn't even take his birth-given name to honour the people who brought him into the world. All this just so that Shirou can inherit some estate and money. How very convenient.

How nice of them to keep Shirou's money safe until he could pry them out of their cold dead hands. I love how they all died leaving Shirou unchallenged for his inheritance.

Bruh there's no mercy decapitation needed cause he honorably finished cutting his stomach if I remember correctly. Nice fic though, I especially like your asoiaf crossover

Sorry to hear about this. I really enjoyed this story. Thank you.

Sometimes I decided to search the names of the characters to see if their canon or not, but this time with Stone Lee begs the question, was this on purpose?

I’d like to thank you for writing as much of this as you did, because this has been one of the best fanfictions I have ever read. While I wish that you would continue this amazing story, I understand why you plan not to. I do hope that someday you continue this story, even if I never read it, because the idea of this going unfinished, or even continued by someone with a different style of writing than you, saddens me immensely. Regardless, I wish you well in the rest of your life.

I would like to tell everybody that this Fic has been adopted by an author in this site called ferduran, he hasn't posted anything but did share his plans for this story in the beginning of the chapter (Chapter 23) of his fic Unlimited Rettousei. Have Nice day