Could you please add on to this story? I love this story so much!

Hee-hee! Loved Queenie's reaction! Great story so far...

Lovely

Oh, this was lovely! Thank you for sharing it with us. :)

And newt is just there sleeping. That's why I love him

For once Newtade the first move. Also, what the period is this?

I love this, can't wait for next chapter!:)

I love this story!

Not knowing where you're going with the story, I don't see why it's a bad thing. Unless it's because of the time period and she's embarrassed because it isn't proper? Queenie would never tell anyone or make fun of her sister, though. I don't think she'd try to steal him, either. She's too kind hearted and caring. Plus, she likes the No-Maj.

You write well. Don't get me wrong, I enjoy your story. Just trying to figure it where it's going is all. :-)

Awww so nice! Lots of lovely kissing, and then the sleep snuggles was just so cute. And then Queenie the next morning is Hilarious. I could just hear her smugness in my head; not in a nasty way, just as a "you are so busted big sister" moment. So perfect. :)

Can't wait for the next chapter!

I love this, I love this! Update soon, please, I want to know, I need to read about what happens next. (Does he get a fever?)