How could I missed this? How can I call myself a Constantine fan? Ah, I feel so ashamed... but better late then never right?
The story is pretty good. Sometimes you have used the same words too often and sometimes I left like you don't really understand the character, cause they just didn't speak naturally, you know, what I mean?
Burning also know how hard it is to write without being even only a little bit OOC, so you definitely should continue in writing. I see there a potential. :) Fingers crossed!