This story has been brilliant so far! I'm loving every section of it! The characters, even the ones that only last about five seconds against the Flood, are all great and well characterised. Kinda wish that we could see how Mara, Mira and Cole are going and dealing with PTSD back on Coruscant, without them facing the Flood, since I found their story to be really good. Also, if the Arbiter comes into the fight personally, I can imagine the Gravemind hijacking a holographic meeting in order to threaten both Chief and Arbiter, since all graveminds share the same mind and memories, so I can imagine it being a little pissed at those two for its destruction on the Ark. Other than those two things, I love this!

Just finished this, awesome story, characters, and plot direction. You do a very good job of developing characters as well as gradually increasing the pace and direness of the plot throughout the story.

The Jedi order have no f*cking idea what they're doing or what they're dealing with. They aren't even wearing protective gear or gas masks. I'm just waiting for the UNSC to get back with their nova bombs and say f*ck this we're nuking planets, because its what they have to do. I'm sure the Jedi and Republic will object, but hopefully the Haloverse is finally able to drill the true nature of the situation into the incredibly thick skulled sw verse.

Great story, great characters. Love to see the conflict between factions. Can't wait to read more, keep up the good work :)

Please continue this epic novel, Cause I've been with it from the start. Its good to see this up and continuing.

-PhantomGenisis

I wonder if we see the Chiss and other Legend frations from the Unknown Regions.

Thrawn: So you're asking us to Ally with our enemies to fight this Flood and to glass any infested planet?

Rtas: Yes.

Thrawn: Okay. This is the same strategy than again the Mngall-Mngall back home.

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It’s so frustrating to see the Jedi so stupid on their take against the flood but you write it so well that it makes it hard for me to not sympathize with them. Top tier story and it’s almost impossible to believe it’s your first story.

The foolishness of the jedi are exponentially frustrating. I'm waiting for the Sangheili/UNSC to just say "fuck it", and nuke as many planets as they can on their way out of the galaxy lol.

Yus! Character development! This is intense, dread filled, and terrifyingly Awesome! I like this story you've got going on, I look forward to more, until next chapter, Stay Awesome!

This makes the wait for these chapters worth it. Looks like Aayla and her allies are in for a tough time. Hope she survives.

Nice to see you back, enjoyed the more thorough characters. Good work, can't wait for more.

"Never do anything to hurt me" watches revenge of the sith

Good to see you back

I have a feeling that the destruction of Cloud City will have some serious consequences for the alliance.

Ya, as another reviewer said the Gravemind now know about the 150 contingencies that the clones have drilled into them and lets be honest the Gravemind mind raped Cortana and spoke in rhymes cuz it had consumed many poets cuz it had wanted to speak in rhymes ( dude flex on everyone around it by just talking) there is no way that it would not take advantage of such a huge tactical advantage. a tactical advantage no one "trustworthy" is aware of.

imagine order 66 or order 65, the chaos that would bring, it is a very flood thing to do.

Thanks for the chapter and showing this story is not dead.

Once again, I thought you handled the Jedi in this series very well. Their order is flawed for what they are doing. As Mace Windu said "We are keepers of the peace, not soldiers." They will always do the noble thing to save life, which makes them bad commanders as they cannot sacrifice units for a larger tactical advantage. Fitting that the Sangheili are the first ones to see this incompatible merge between peace keepers and commanders as they once served a species not known for their combat expertise.

Enjoyed Vos's response to Ayala's question about the clones. Yeah, it makes sense that someone more in tune with nature does not trust a creature grown in a lab. And his argument for why he is suspicious of them makes sense. They did come out of nowhere without permission from the Jedi.

Thanks for showing the Flood place a clever trap to lure out the Jedi commander with them not immediately infecting civilians to bring out the Jedi commander for their bleeding heart. Not only are they intelligent flesh with valuable military secrets, they also have a connection to the Force. A connection that the Flood might break.